Feedback thread for Love, Faith and Destiny. If you haven't done so please take a look at the story thread and share your thoughts on it with me. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you!
Good. But study up departments. NATO actully would not be involved in this in the means that you explained. UN would. Could spark another russian, is arms race. But dark matter is being researched now to test for making weapons. So study up on atomic and sub atomic energy and the relationship it has to anti-(dark) matter
I'm not familiar on NATO so I guess I'll read on them, but as for the Dark Matter I'm not really hinting at the same one that's being researched right now. The two Dark Matter roles will be explained later on.
My honest opinion... It was what I was expected, the title, but the story was good so far. I didn't expect it to be that because of the title, but other than that. It is a good story.