Lost Now, Haunted Forever

I heard the door open. It creaked like nails on a chalkboard. My head whipped around, letting my eyes stare right at the ajar door. I had hoped for the best to happen. I could never compare the fear and terror that would fill my eyes in the next minute. My name is Aspen Waters, and this is my story.

 

I knew this summer was going to be amazing! A whole two months with Riley, my boyfriend, and the girls! The best part was the vacation to California with Lucy's family and mine. Lucy is my best friend and her family is wonderful, unlike mine. I'm the youngest in the family, dad and mom being the oldest, the Sean, my brother, at seventeen. Finally, me, a girl who is fifteen years old named Aspen, boring. We were that perfect family everyone always wanted but never got. But my parents and I didn't really get along. Sean and I were extremeley close though. He knows everything about me- sometimes more than Lucy- and vise versa. Sean would go to the ends of the earth for me, and I knew it. After all, I am his baby sister. I loved him, I could never live without him.

 

Tomorrow is the first day of summer vacation. Today is almost over, just about fifteen more minutes until ninth period is over. Everything would finally be over. I was doodling in my notebook. Drawing little hearts and stars. I drew wonderfully when I actually tried. I turned the page and started a real creation. It was a boy and a girl sitting on a park bench. A tree was so innocently hanging over them. The girl was slowly disappearing. Her body taken by a cloud of dust. She was reaching out for the boy. He say there and shed a single tear as he watched her go. One red rose was lying on the ground.

 

Yes I know!  I'm having the biggest issue with them right now. Attempting to fix them as I see them. Sorry!

P.S., I made a feedback thread.

 

Thanks D. I am an amateur. I don't specialize in writing, I do it as a hobby. Also, this story is being in the eyes of Aspen. She's not a philosopher. And honestly, I didn't write this to please you. I wrote this for other entertainment. The people who actually enjoy to read a "amateur" story.

Also, you spread your thoughts negatively onto everyone's threads. So, how are you supposed to make me feel bad about what you say? What you do to me, if positive. It shows me how low some people can get.