Losing Irena

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Irena, Jul 13, 2013.

  1. Hello guys. This is the same story as "Love and Jealousy Is Not a Good Match." Someone pointed out to me about the title and the emojis in the title. The title didn't quite match with the story. The story is still the same, but edited a little. Please wait for a Feedback Thread for this story before you post on this thread. That's what the feeback thread is for, right? I thought so, lol.
     
  2. Prolong:

    I sit there and I watch.
    I think, how can someone push someone who's in love with them away?
    How can they not think and deal with the fact that they hurt them?
    How can they cause them pain?

    The girl is speaking to the guy she loves speak to another female. He says there just friends, but ever wounder if they're more than friends?

    She watches, she cries. She cuts herself untill she bleeds. She tells the guy who she loves that he wouldn't have to worry about her anymore.

    How could he just sit there and let it go? He feels really bad and has not let her go. He wants to hold her, he wants to take away the pain and apologize for everything he's done for her. But how can she forgive him? She cries and cries till a bullet comes towards her. There it is.

    Her pain is permanetly gone, her soul is in a happy place, but her body stays on Earth. Her soul is away from the guy who caused her pain. He'll learn his lesson for hurting her. He can't let go of her nor does he wants too. He won't love again nor will he show his love to anoter female again.

    Ever.
     
  3. Chapter One:"This love is never ending."

    "You're still in love with her! How could you Jake?"
    Jake stands there. He has no emotions at all. He doesn't feel anything nor does he care anymore. He's done. He gives up. The seventh girl was hurt because of him and died because of him. His other 6 ex's he's dated hurted him. It explains so much of why he's such a jerk. But how can he just hurt her and let it happen?

    You know you still love her, huh? He asked himself. Of course he still loves her! He really can't let go of her. He knew that, this new girl was right. She was and she knew it too.

    "Megan, I do still love Irena. But there's no way I can get her back nor can I get her trust back. I hurted her and let her die. I knew I was going to hurt her. I always hurt the people I care about. Am I ever going to make it up? Probably not. If I were you, I wouldn't worry about who I love. I won't love anyone again. Ever."

    "Jake," Megan stares at him as she sits down on a big rock. "Are you mad at yourself?"
    He sighs before speaking again. "Yes." He says in a low, calm voice.
    Megan looks at him. "How come you never show her your love? You're always speaking to me."
    Jake gets up and walks towards a tree. "No!" He yells. "YOU always speak to ME first!" Megan walks towards him.
    "Don't. Don't get any closer."
    Megan looks at him, a little scared.
    "But why?"
    "Just don't."
    "You can love again! You can trust someone again! You can do it! It IS easy, if you let it be. Just because Irena isn't here anymore doesn't mean you can't love anyone ever again!"

    "You don't get it! She's DIFFERENT! The only girl who hasn't forgotten about me or hurted me! She actually loved me!" He puts his hands up as fire forms around his hands, then he throws his hands on his sides as the fire comes up from his hands. Megan takes a step back from the angry Jake.

    "Okay, okay! I get it. You can't love because you don't want to or trust anyone anymore. I get it!"

    Jake looks at her with burning eyes.

    To be continued..
     
  4. Chapter 1 Continued. Part 2: Megan's POV.

    I look at Jake. Woundering what could I have done to make him this upset. Why must he show him controlling fire in front of me? He must be really angry with me. I really don't know what to do. But why? Why did he break up with me? What did I even do? I don't remember it! Uhg!
    I'm looking at Jake, still thinking.

    "Jake?" I say in a worried voice.
    "What?"
    "Are you mad at me?"
    "About what?"
    "The past."
    "The past?"
    "I knew you forgot! My god! It's always about Irena!! Irena this, Irena that! When will it ever be about me!" I started seeing lighting coming from my hands with the thundering sounds starting too. What's happening?
    Jake looks at me, a little shocked. "What the hell?" He asks, with an surprised expression. "What?" I look at him, rolling my eyes a I pretend like nothing happened.

    "Never mind. Why are you with me any way?"
    "I heard about what happened to Irena, a few weeks ago. She hasn't been in school for months and I know why."
    "What? And you didn't tell me!"
    Uh-oh! Jake looks like he's getting mad at me again. I really don't want to see more of his fire powers.

    "Tell me!" Jake stares at me with his eyes getting redder and redder. Oh god no. I back up before I started speaking again.
    "Okay! She got ****. Jeez, calm down!" Not a smart comment! I thought to myself.

    Jake comes towards me as if he's ready to hurt me.
    "Who did it?"
    "I'm not sure who, but I assumed it was Zach."
    "Zach?"
    "The guy from math class, the class clown? The popular dude? The sexy one? Seriously?"
    "I don't know him, but I'm going to kill him."
    Jake starts walking towards the direction of our high school. I followed him, trying to catch up to him.
    "What are you doing?" I asked.
    "What does it look like I'm doing? I'm killing Zach." I jump on Jake's back then we both fall on the grass, Jake quickly gets up pushing me off him. I end up flying backwards, it almost looks like I'm flying in the sky. The wind is blowing in my fast so fast! I thought I was going to die till I landed somewhere, not close to Jake. It hurt when I landed.

    I look up to see where I am, but instead I find a group of teenaged boys about Jake's age looking at me like, "what the hell?"

    I then noticed that Zach was the leader of these group of boys.

    "Well, hello there. Megan."

    To be continued..
     
  5. Okay apparently one of the words was a bypass lol.. to explain that one of the girls was. Let's just say she didn't want it, but was forced to do it anyway. should give you a hint. Sorry for that.