LoKaW: Resurrection FeedBack

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Zethryr, Aug 22, 2014.

  1. Tips, Critique, and questions here.
     
    #1 Zethryr, Aug 22, 2014
  2. Pretty cool so far, I'm just waiting to see where this is going xD
     
    #2 DOP-Dark_Tiger-DOP, Aug 25, 2014
  3. I'm judging, so no advice from Me. It has been read though. ️
     
    #3 O_o_____Frog____o_0, Aug 25, 2014
  4. Promise the Chapters will get longer guys lol. I hate typing on my phone.
     
    #4 Zethryr, Aug 25, 2014
  5. Btw sorry moose, but it had to happen.
     
    #5 Zethryr, Aug 25, 2014
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