LoKaW Feedback - Both Versions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011.

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  1. Review both versions of The Legend Of KaW here!

    'Nuff Said.

    -FORMAT-
    1) Cheese's Version
    2) FeatherHunter's Version
    3) Comparing summary
     
    #1 cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011
  2. 1) Just a little comment.WTF? Good but WTF? This seems like that other kaw book I can't remember. Don't get me wrong it's good but WTF?
     
    #2 *IRONhulk (01), Dec 27, 2011
  3. ^It's a remake OF the remake of the original Revolution.

    New storyline.
     
    #3 cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011
  4. Oh yeah, by the way.

    NO POSTING ON THE ACTUAL STORIES. POST YOUR FEEDBACK HERE.
     
    #4 cheesemuffin, Dec 27, 2011
  5. I still like it. It's just WTF?
     
    #5 *IRONhulk (01), Dec 27, 2011
  6. Bump.
     
    #6 FeatherHunter, Dec 27, 2011
  7. I haven't read cheeses version but feathers version was awesome! I love how many elements of kaw u put into the story lol very very creative
     
    #7 *Tigris108 (01), Dec 28, 2011
  8. [FeatherHunter's] 2:
    Nice! I thought that the usage of introducing thinkers was pretty unique at the start ;) and a person with Multiple Personality Disorder? Even better... Who knows how many possibilities you could do with the archetype Good vs Evil ;)

    In short, CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! Great Job!
     
    #8 Platinum2, Dec 28, 2011
  9. YES!!!! Wait till I introduce the rest of the Thinkers and the Areopagus!
     
    #9 FeatherHunter, Dec 28, 2011
  10. When looking for an insane person for reference just look at deadpool or sheggorath or the joker....
     
    #10 *IRONhulk (01), Dec 28, 2011
  11. MOARRRR
     
    #11 Platinum2, Dec 28, 2011
  12. :( That's not cool, dwei.
     
    #12 FeatherHunter, Dec 28, 2011
  13. I love the second chapter, and I find the trollostic accent hilarious lol, u have alot of talent feather (>'.')> :)
     
    #13 *Tigris108 (01), Dec 28, 2011
  14. Lol... Sorry, I'm jk ;) take your time in writing... Overexcited I guess :p my bad
     
    #14 Platinum2, Dec 28, 2011
  15. Wait to you see the next part...
     
    #15 FeatherHunter, Dec 28, 2011
  16. I demand to see an idiot charecter!
     
    #16 *IRONhulk (01), Dec 28, 2011
  17. @Feather the new chapter was a lot better. Interesting but still has a good flow of events and fair length. Good job!
     
    #17 Storallelite, Dec 28, 2011
  18. Next part coming momentarily! Say hello to... Well, it's a surprise.
     
    #18 FeatherHunter, Dec 28, 2011
  19. Why has nobody mentioned mine?

    I'll be posting in an hour or so, really busy with make-up work, missed a week of school due to the illness D:
     
    #19 cheesemuffin, Dec 29, 2011
  20. POSTED NEW INSTALLMENT! Feedback... AWAY!
     
    #20 FeatherHunter, Dec 29, 2011
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