Lies

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Ahdragos (01), Sep 6, 2010.

  1. The best is gone, it’s sad to say, the darker side is all that’ll stay.
    It was too good to actually be real, and now I have nothing left to feel.
    The love fades and slowly dies, because of your compulsive lies.
    Hatred burns hot in my veins, and makes me forget all of my pains.
    But I won’t shed a tear for you, because I loved what wasn’t true.
    And now a lesson I have learned, if I love I will get burned.
    And now the darkness pours from my soul, to fill the gaping wounded hole.
    I should have known from the start, you’d leave this chasm in my heart.
    But here I stand as strong as can be, I will not let you get the best of me.
    And so I write these words for you, of my love that I once grew
    So now I become a bitter man, it’s all that’s left, it’s all I can.
    At least these harsh feelings never lie, nor did they ever make me cry
    Which is more than you can say, but that’s alright, I too can play.
    Here comes the beast from within, and in this contest you can’t win.
    You have ruined what once was pure, a love so complete, so very sure.
    So in its place all that now remains, a vile beast free of moral chains.
     
  2. Story of my life bro  bump
     
  3. Ahdragos that was beast! Good job bro! 
     
  4. Excellent use of rhyming Cuplets.
    Good poem.
    Assassin
     
  5.  Great 
     
  6. Step 2: slit wrists
     
  7. Wow havoc that was mean...

    Ahdragos nice poem bro
     
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  9. Gj Ahdragos 
     
  10. I loled at havocs post but seriously good poem :)
     
  11. Good job bro
     
  12. Can I use this possibally in my story? I will say it was by u of course, but It tells part of my story.
     
  13. No, you can not use my poem
     
  14. Amazingly great poem

    Deserves a bump ^.^