Feather I looovveee it. Its so mysteriiiiiouuusss. :3 and btw thank u soo much for putting me in the story, u didn't have to do that ^.^ great job jay!
Hmm... Idk but I think he may go on some kind of quest to regain the memories. Or something else. Lol idk
It really isn't. The first flashback in the beginning talked about the events prior to that day. And tigris, we'll see.
-.- Stora said she understood. Why can't y'all? In the first flashback, it's 4 AM, i think. We're gonna say it's Tuesday, 4 AM. Feather is thinking about Monday to himself. Feather is asked about his journey to Tige which he began Sunday night and ended Monday morning. Those are the only words TNO or TSM wants him to say or else he would have pulled more answers about other events like handing out quests if he wanted to know about them. Obviously something happened during that time or TNO/TSM wouldn't be so interested. The second flashback goes forward from the first to his prison cell. It's still Tuesday. The third goes forward from the second to his freedom and stuff. Then we're back in the present.
Looking forward to the next chapters. Hopefully this'll be the one FF I can actually follow until the end
Personally, I think there's a bit too much mysteriousness, and a little too much emphasis on Feather, but if that's the way it is, I see no other problems.