Learning the skills or to flee a iwrite presentation

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  1. Pls don't post here
    Note:I'm slow writer and I might not post a chap everyday
    might b a redo cos I'll maybe add more


    Here it's is
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    chapter 1


    I moved painfully pulling myself out of a pile of thorns but it was worth it, my tattered pants and T-shirt provided no protected from the thorns. As I got up, I got up I had blood all over my body dripping down making smearing coming off on anything that I brushed against

    I followed with the most amout of care I could not to alert the deer the tiniest bit that I was behind it. I had been  tracking the same deer now for one and a half days now and I was running low on food

    THUD! The bolt fired from my crossbow hit and hit the deer in it's leg forcing the animal to stumble in pain through the thick undergrowth of the forest  making the wound tear Painfully open makings it bigger untill the deer colapsed on a big lump of grass.
      I had been learning and waiting for this moment all my life growing and learning my skills such learning the throwthe rusty knife that I found when I was playing outside, I also learnt to use  a yew bow my dad made from the yew that colapsed last summer making the wood able to be made into a bow but I never used it untill I turned seven
    From the turned 7 I was a little boy at that stage aiming a little yew bow into a tree and trying to hit a bird that was perched on the edge of the branch
    But this was different it was my first big kill that my poor family would trusting me to bring a good amout of meat back so we can survive the cold nights to come
    I pulled the deer through the broken branchs and the thorn bushes like the one befor. I cut open I deer over a river where i striped it's stomach contents out into the stream startling some fish that darted away trying to avoid the guts from the dead deer 

    as I got closer to home I spotted a faint misty haze telling me that the villege that I lived in was preparing for a cold winters night where the weather was alwas upredictable, wheather it was going to snow, rain, or even some sun that the farmers had treasured each moment of it 

    I walked through into our little wooden hut on the outside of the college where I was meet by my old ragged dad called John who started cooking the deer.  It was the first meal we had had in a few days and as soon as the fat touched my throat it felt the best thing I had had in well ever. 
    End of chapter
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