L' malar Whol Kestal Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010.

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  1. This is the feedback forum. Note that each chapter is written by a chosen player.
    L' malar Whol Kestal stands for Fight for Hope. There are multiple races in the story, including Human, Elf, Drow, and Dwarf. The humans prefer swords, elves like range and magic, Drows prefer swords and magic, and dwarves LOVE axes. Comments, suggestions, or criticism are all welcome!
     
    #1 DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010
  2. Can I write a chapter plz
     
    #2 Spectre, Aug 2, 2010
  3. I am sorry but we have already chosen the writers and hidden our work in a secret place... So sorry...
     
    #3 DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010
  4. 
     
    #4 iLoL, Aug 2, 2010
  5. I think he wants the story to actually be good and readable.
     
    #5 *F0EHAMMER (01), Aug 2, 2010
  6. that too
     
    #6 DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010
  7. I look a bit forward to this and it might end up being the 3rd story I actually read on fourms.
     
    #7 *F0EHAMMER (01), Aug 2, 2010
  8. Thank you and there might be an update soon
     
    #8 DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010
  9. UPDATEPlease rate on this forum only!!!!
     
    #9 DarkFalcon, Aug 2, 2010
  10. My chapter is posted
     
    #10 *Utho (01), Aug 2, 2010
  11. I like how this is comming together so far. Great job guys!!
     
    #11 *Irin (01), Aug 3, 2010
  12. Thanks
     
    #12 DarkFalcon, Aug 3, 2010
  13. Zil natha basilia udos orn plynill uyl'vath statha beldrous!
     
    #13 *iPimella (01), Aug 3, 2010
  14. Chapter 4 ligrr is up
     
    #14 *iPimella (01), Aug 4, 2010
  15. Update
     
    #15 DarkFalcon, Aug 4, 2010
  16. Bumpity
     
    #16 *iPimella (01), Aug 4, 2010
  17. Well lol I didn't read it but good job. I wanted to be on the writing committee but I saw u picked parts in forum
     
    #17 *-Smallz- (01), Aug 4, 2010
  18. Bump for uthos chapter
     
    #18 *iPimella (01), Aug 5, 2010
  19. Chapter 9 is up
     
    #19 DarkFalcon, Aug 11, 2010
  20. Bump!!
     
    #20 *Irin (01), Aug 23, 2010
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