"What do you mean I'm chosen?" the girl demanded, although nobody was there.Then a voice came from within the depths of darkness. "You shall find out what this means soon.." the voice replied sternly. " Just tell me what's going on!" she begged. "It will make sense soon,little one.." the voice became stronger, until the girl saw a person, who was talking to her all along.The man was wearing a long black cloak,and all that was visible was two amber-orange eyes and a few wisps of gray hair."What is your name young one?" the man demanded. "Naxan*" the girl replied, as if in a trance. (*= Pronounced Na-Shan)(kind of like saying xion, but Naxan)
Hm.. Pretty good. Write more and make sure to put a space between sentences like so 'he struck. Out of' And you'll be good! Also, for people who don't know what kingdom hearts is explain it a tad. :3
Note: Good song to listen to while reading my latest update.Sorry it took so long!!! Song: Bring me to life Artist:Evanescence I haven't added any info on kingdom hearts; so I will try to add more laterif you don't understand please try to google it Enjoy
It's best that you make a feedback thread. Whether readers like it or not, you're free to write it, so if you have an idea, go all the way with it (I.e. Making the story and feedback thread so you can continue). So more please lol. iZaln
I'd rather she leave it like it is. There have been to many threads lately like Mechs chuck Norris thread.
Well with her feedback thread, it'll push out pointless threads. Writers can update and stories are up again. Lol iZaln
P.s before you read ///or \\\ means thinking ~~~~~~Day 1~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ Ναχαn~~~~~~~~~~ When I awoke I saw white all around me.\\\Am I dead?/// I thought.I sighed loudly and got up.I noticed I had been lying on a neatly made porcelain white bed.On the edge of the bed lie a long black cloak which fitted me perfectly along with matching black boots.I quickly changed and walked outside my door, I saw a boy who seemed to be my age with the same black cloak on that I had,except his hood had been pulled up covering his face.He held out a gloved hand to me," Follow me" he whispered his voice edged with a dark calm.I took his hand carefully and followed him down what seemed and endless flight of white stairs.He pulled me through another door; and kept running down hallways until we entered a chamber with fourteen chairs in it; the hooded boy guided me to my seat; which was placed next to his." Organization members you may now remove your hoods and introduce yourself to our fourteenth member Naxan", All of the members stood up and removed their hoods. " I am Xemnas" the man who seemed to be the leader said.He had tan skin, similar to mine with amber eyes and silver spiky hair that went down his back. The next member who stood up had an eye patch on over his left eye.He also had long black hair which seemed to go down to his lower back. " I am Xigbar,"he said" nice to meet you" he added.The next man who stood up made me feel uneasy; he had long black hair in dreadlocks down his back." I am Xaldin, nice to see a new face around here" he smiled at me and shook my hand." Hello little one," a blonde haired man with eerie green eyes said," I'm the scientist around here, I am Vexen." he shook my hand roughly and promptly sat back down. The next member seemed very quiet; the strong silent type of guy. He had short orange-red wavy hair and spoke softly to me as if I was a baby rabbit." Hi,I'm Leaxus" he said quietly. The next man was tall and skinny, with grey ash hair covering his right eye, he was tightly clutching a worn purple blue book." I am Zexion" he stated proudly," That is all, nice to meet you Naxan" he sat down and quickly opened his book.I nodded politely at him," Heya kiddo," a polite voice murmured.I looked up and saw a person I was positive I'd seen before. He had a tall lithe frame with bright turquoise eyes that matched well with his eye popping red hair that spiked straight up." I'm Axel, Got it memorized" everyone around me laughed except me. The next member had brown spiked hair that was a light brown that was spiked at the top of his head and fell around his face." Heya there brown eyed girl" he crooned, making me blush intensely. He strummed a blue sitar on his lap" I'm Demyx" he sang" pleased to meet you Naxan" he walked over to me and gently pushed my shoulder length black curls away from my face" better" he said smiling." do you know how to play poker?" the next member asked, I shook my head" leave her alone Luxord" Axel said laughing.Luxord sighed," Hello I'm Luxord" he said rubbing his buzz cut blonde hair, " nice to meet you" he said in his thick British accent. The next member was arranging flowers," I'm Marluxia" he said,weaving flowers into his shoulder length pink spiked hair. The next member was a female\\\Finally!!!/// she had short blonde hair that seemed to stick out in the front like a bugs anntenna." I'm Larxene," she said smiling" glad to have a female member here" she smiled at me again.the next member was apparently second-in-command, he had long blue hair that was spiky and a scar on his forehead in the shape of an "X" " I am Saix and I will be assigning you missions over the next few weeks." his eyes burned with a ferocity almost on par with Xemnas.I shuddered. The last member was...well..drop dead handsome, he had an edge to him that drew me to him like a moth to flame.his blonde spiky hair and deep soul piercing blue eyes grabbed my attention." I'm your mentor" he said smiling" Roxas"
~~~~~~Day 32~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ Ναχαn~~~~~~~~~~ "Naxan!" Roxas yelled running after me,his keyblade held tightly in his right hand, he stopped next to me gasping for air. We were on a mission in Twilight Town to collect hearts. "Don't try to charge at the heartless,you can only use your magic spells for now,let me handle the heartless. You need to practice on drawing out your keyblade." Roxas looked at me,noticing the determination in my fierce brown eyes. " I can handle them.." I snarled, I whipped my left hand out and a white light circled me. Roxas covered his eyes blinded by the light.When the lights stopped and I hovered in the air,Roxas saw my keyblade, It was Oblivion the black keyblade Roxas's best friend Xion was assumed to be "inside".I slashed at the heartless enraged at them for no reason at all, the pink hearts emerged from their departing bodies and floated towards Kingdom Hearts.Roxas's mouth turned up into a smile, he controlled the Keyblade; Oathkeeper(Light) while I had Oblivion(Dark) Roxas,at one point controlled both of them,but he had given Oblivion up because if the painful memories attached to it.We finished off the heartless quickly and Roxas opened a portal to leave " C'mon" he said smiling holding a hand out to me,I blushed///he's so hot.../// I thought, I shook my head///don't fall in love!! You'll only get hurt/// But when I looked up Roxas had already left for the clocktower.I closed the portal and ran up past the clumped stores and houses,then I overheard Larxene talking to Marluxia." I told you to kill her before she could summon Oblivion, you idiot now it's too late!!!" I heard a slash of a scythe and flinched.I heard blood gush onto the clean brown pavement. "I-I-I'm so sorry Marluxia"I heard Larxene stutter.I looked down at my black gloved hand and noticed I was trembling.I finally summoned enough courage to look over and got face to face with Marluxia! I let out a scream, but it was muffled by Marluxia covering up my mouth. "What did you see?" he snarled, he let his hand slide off my mouth so I could speak." N-N-Nothing" I croaked." Liar!" he snarled raising his scythe in a striking position. My eyes widened\\\ NO!!! I can't die like this!!///
~~~~~Day 33~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~ Ναχαn~~~~~~~~~~ I felt my body get pushed back, and slam against a wall."Roxas!!" I screamed, I saw him bleeding all over the place,I covered my mouth, my eyes widened with fury and shock. I lowered my head." You did this..." I snarled raising my keyblade at Marluxia."And?" he chuckled.///So he must be the one who is betraying the organization///"N-N-Naxan" Roxas mumbled." Stay calm, Roxas." I ordered, I quickly summoned up a curagra spell, the green healing light surrounded him, healing him instantly. "You're dead." I roared, charging at Marluxia. I leaped into the air and unleashed the fury of my limit break. I saw Marluxia's eyes widen with shock, then change into hatred." Pathetic girl," he snarled" you cannot defeat me-" but he was interruptedby Axel." But I can." he whipped out his chakrams and hurled them at Marluxia." Impossible..." Marluxia cried out as he crumpled to the ground, and faded away. "Thanks Naxan, and Axel" Roxas said politely," I couldn't have done it without you guys"he smiled at both of us."Who wants sea salt ice cream?" Axel asked. "Me!!!" Roxas and I exclaimed at the same time." C'mon" Axel yelled as he streaked to the clock tower, "last one who gets to top owes the winner ice cream!!" Roxas shouted. Somewhere off in a castle, A former friend of Roxas vowed revenge on his newfound friend Naxan.
"Hey Roxas," I said sucking on my sea salt ice cream." who's that girl down there?" I pointed at a frail girl dressed in an oversized organization 13 cloak." It's.." Roxas choked," Xion..." Axel finished.I ran down to see this "old friend"of Roxas. But, when I ran up to greet her, I was met with a sharp slice to the leg.I winced in pain." Xion!" Roxas snarled attacking her head on. " leave Naxan alone!" he snarled.
Xion, quickly dissapeared from the battle and Roxas kept his firm grip on me, until she was gone." Rox-" I started" Sh.." he said as he leaned in closer to me, I could smell his inviting warm cologne calling to me, my rose colored lips meeting his chapped ones, the clock tower rang behind us, but we didn't care. After we broke apart, he blushed and looked at the ground, "You tasted like warm vanilla..." Roxas said smiling" you smelt.." I started" I don't even know how to describe it.." I blushed looking at his lips wanting to feel all bubbly and giddy again." What are you two up to?" a voice behind us said, Xemnas stood there , squinting at us. Now we both blushed," nothing " "That kiss didn't look like "nothing" " Xemnas said. "You," Xemnas looked at me," I can understand, " I looked at him puzzled." But, Roxas you have been here long enough. You know the rules.." Xemnas eyed Roxas" I know, no relationships in the Organization" My eyes widened " But." Roxas started " I will give you a warning.. If I ever find you two kissing or even holding hands. I will kill one of you.. It may seem harsh but it's the rules" Xemnas then opened a portal and left. "I guess we're back to just friends again" Roxas said as he laced his black gloved fingers through his blonde hair."Can I?" I looked at him" Yea, one last time" And we kissed our last kiss.. " Let's go RTC" (ReturnTto the Castle) Roxas said taking his warm arms away from mine/// No!/// I screamed in my head.///This is so unfair!///