KILLDRONE's Return AS KILLDRONE returns to the KAW battlefield, he has 3 thoughts running in his mind. What has happend to thy clan and why are thy inactive. What has happend while thee was gone. What should thee do next? As he walks around, searching for any sign of allies he finds a clan , "The Green Room" it is called. As time processes, he finds out he is low on coin and decides to apply. Of course as it is the mighty Killdrone they accept immediately. As coin builds up and land is bought Killdrone feels as if this new clan could be given a chance of being a permanent residence of thee. However a fatal moment appears, during a mighty epic battle, Killdrone is kicked for using items even though no notice of the ban of items was given to thee. After accepting the request of joining back, Killdrone leaves as he now knows that this clan is full of snakes and traitors. So here we are as he begins his journey again in search of reliable allies, hopefully finding old ones on the way.Only time will tell......... CHAPTER ONE OF "Killdrone Returns" Please stay tuned every week for the latest update Weekly riddle: How far can a dog run in the forest? No Flames as such is the sign of the devil. Cookies however are appreciated.
Your transitions were kind of random and quick, mostly because it's one block of text. Make paragraphs to help separate ideas. It is a great idea and start but many revisions are needed