Chapter One "Sister, I'm going to bed now." My sister Rei called to me "Ok!! I'll be there soon." I replied I'm Briar Sanders, I'm 16, My ferternal twin sister is my best friend. Our mother got a job in Paris and left us, and my dad is in jail for... Certain reasons. I went upstairs to our bedroom and when I got up there I felt a co breeze. "Rei? Why didnt you close the window?" She didnt answer. She must've fallen asleep already. I went over to the window to close it and saw a rope ladder.... "Um Rei?" I turned to her bed and she wasn't there! " REI!?!" I yelled I ran downstairs and grabbed the phone. *beep beep beep* "You've called 911 what's the emergency?" a womans voice said on the other end " My sister Rei was kidnapped!!" " Are you sure she's not just out of the house? When did you see her last?" " She was kidnapped! She went to our room and there was a ropeladder down the side of the house and she was gone!" I replied freaking out " Did she run away? Do you two not get along?" The women wouldn't stop asking questions! Was she really with the police station?! " We always get along! 24/7! There were mud footprints on the floor! Now are you gonna get the police or not!" I yelled " Calm down I'm sure she'll be ok." The lady TRIEd to say "YOUR CRAZY!!!! I BET UR NOT EVEN SOMEONE WHO WORKS WITH THE POLICE! DID U TAMPER WITH THIS NUMBER?!" I shrieked " Heh. I AM with the police! But I bet she's not kidnapped." *buzzzzzzzz* Ok that lady is crazy! Someone who works with the police doesn't hand up with you. *Beep beep beep* "Nnn Hello...?" "Blake is me Briar!" "Oh hey Bri, why are you calling so late?" Blake asked sleepily "It's Rei, she's been kidnapped!! I called the police but the lady wouldn't do anything!!" " WHAT?!?! Then we need to GO to the Police!" he replied in panic "No way! Something is going on there and I don't trust them a bit! I'm going myself to find Rei!" " You can't go yourself!!" " Just watch me." I said it a hushed tone " I'll come to."
Um sorry. This isn't that good. I just skipped most of it. Anyone who doesn't use paragraphs, I just give up. And also, try to build up the story a bit more before you bring in the drama. You don't really feel sorry for 'Rei' because you don't get to know her character.