Sorry I posted on ur story!!!!-it's was really good, the dramatic stuff came a little too soon, otherwise the intro was cool!
Oh, and I stopped reading after you wrote: "I'm Briar Sanders, I'm 16, and my ferternal twin sister is my best friend" YOU DONT EVER DO THAT UNLESD YOU CAN PULL IT OFF. YOU CANNOT PULL IT OFF.
I recommend that you read Gloomi's Guide to Writing. And by the way, people don't actually say "ur". They say "you're".
You know what? @D_bo and SmexyHott You just trash everything D_Bo cuz ur an idiot And Smexyhott(her name is wrong for who she really is) Ur just mad and to childish to let go what I said about your failed little misfits clan
Celeste, you're the one who's mad. We're giving feed back like you said. And you get mad for WHAT'S TRUE. Stop whining. Write better. Edit better. I see you've tried to pull off some story elements that you aren't very good at. One word: Proofreading.
Lol some of this is obvious hating (don't hate on my lil thread too ) but do try n take the constructive criticism You'll be a better writer for it