Kenneth- Perfect One

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Malicious-_-Candy (01), Feb 28, 2012.

  1. yes I know this is unsuitable for the game concept of this game but i'll try
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sidnie-

    Ꭺ brand new day. I walked to the bathroom, brushed my teeth then took a warm bath, wore my favorite white top and jeans. Quickly went down to the dining room to grab a nice breakfast and went to school. On my way to school, I caught sight of that guy- Kenneth. He is so wonderful that every girl fancied him. Ken saw me and gave me a smiling face and a wave. My heart sank with joy. " "Wow, he really likes you!" My friend, Belle came behind me suddenly. "Oh, what what's that?" I turned around in shock. "Uh-uh uh I don't think so.." My cheeks blushed pink. "Haha don't lie Mia! It's so obvious. Well, let's get to school now to avoid detention." she gave a me a long look.

    Finally we arrived at school. "Hi Mia.." Ken said, walking over to me. "Hi.. How are you?" I gave a smile and my cheeks blushed red like a rose. "Wow, he liked me?" I thought to myself." "You are so cute Mia." he blew me a kiss.

    *faint*

    At the nurse room, school
    "Unh. What just happened?" I said, staring at where I was.
    "You fainted.. Anyway I have a confession to make to you." Ken said. "I.. Umm.. Love you, Mia Thorne"
    I had fainted again.

    The next time I woke up, Kenneth was beside me, asleep. I was at my house. I looked at the clock. It was 1:28AM. I looked at Ken and remembered what happened at school. I found a letter next to my bed. It said:
    "Dear Mia.
    I don't love you. I'm serious right over here. I affectionately love you. Cross my heart and hope to die.

    Yours truly,
    Ken"

    "Dear Ken.." I said softly.
    "Yes my lovely Mia?" he woke up.
    "I love you too" I said to Ken.
    This time it was his turn to faint.
    I softly smoothed his brown hair and put him next to my shoulder. I never imagined this would ever happen.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~sidnie-

    so far so good? U enjoying it? If u do I'll continue - 10bumps! Btw i got ton of schoolwork everyday.. I won't be updating that much! Btw it's my first time writing a story tell me how to improve :)

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    Peace to all of ya! ~sidnie

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    by -Sidnie_Rocks-
    on 29 Feb, 2012 6:45 am
    Nice story first! Bump it all the way_ love ya sidnie!
     
  2. xD it's pretty good! I knew a guy named Kenneth
     
  3. Nice story but please don't put anymore fainting in it.