Dew drops fell from trees in the early morning sun, captivating each one into a tiny diamond... As I ran throughout the forest, animals started teeming to life. Just itching for the sun to come up and shower them in light. All of them unaware to the danger coming. Thinking about how they will flee, and tremble in terror. I felt the need to protect the nature here.... But I was here for one purpose, there was no time for fooling around. I soon came to the end of the forest, and there standing in front of me was a giant golden wall. It looked like it was woven from the gods. Each and every strand reaching the same exact height. Glistening like polished gold. I was captivated by it's beauty... But hearing the crack of a twig behind me reminded me yet again of my mission. Taking out a machete, which I had prepared for this very reason, I chopped straight through, the golden shreds going everywhere. Over the next five minutes I was chopping everything in sight, but then I reached the end. Seeing a tall man with a thick black beard and greasy hair, I quickly ducked behind a tree. Thank god he didn't see me, the enemy knew I was here and that's all I wanted them to know. They were tracking me continuously, never giving me a break. The man finally disappeared, I looked around double checking everything, then I ran. Animals scattered in my path, making way. Branches seemed to fling right in my face and grab me just as I went past. My life was depending on this one thing, I could not afford to screw up... I finally reached a break in the forest after about 5 straight hours of running. And there nestled in the deepest part of the forest was the home where I would be staying for the next year of my very long life... My name is Rose Seether, I am about 5.6 and I am currently 651 years old to the day. I am, as many would call me, a bloodthirsty monster. Though, all the same, I am quite human like for a vampire. Though vampires have, Powers, as you could say. Not like super hero powers like in comic books, but it's enough in the supernatural section to be called Powers. I find it quite humorous that humans are scared of us, but I at least I'm not one that exposes myself and kills them. I only drink animal blood, I find human blood is to pure and it cleanses me. I didn't want to be cleansed so I had stopped drinking human blood. Animal blood is dirty and filled with things that only highly trained eyes can see. Their filled with darkness and a source of nutrients that only old or experienced vampires know about. Animals give you the most power because their the most alive in this world. But animals, they are only partly alive. And their also quite stupid which makes them a quick meal. I really can't think at the moment what to add to this, comments and suggestions would be helpful. Also if you possibly wanted to twist it a bit and make it your own, I would love to see the outcome. Thank you for reading, good luck with your ideas!
Good, although there are a few grammatical errors. I also recommend against "I'm _____", but I found it quite descriptive and well flowing. Good job!
@Beriadanwen I know... I noticed the grammar errors after I posted it. It had been sitting in my notes on my iPod for the longest time and I just thought I would put it out there.