it's all about the money

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Anonymous_1234, Jul 11, 2011.

  1. WARNING - this story is rated M13 plus for mild coarse language, some adult themes and crude humour. Enjoy! :)

    Prologue - Wild town in a motel

    Frank walked into a bar, drunk as usual. Without a second glance, he left. His dark brown eyes gleaned in the moonlight, and his jet black hair hid the scars in his face. He was 16 years old but held himself like he was 19.

    His girlfriend Tabatha walked gloomily beside him, her blonde hair reflecting the light from the street. Her blue eyes were soft and held many people wordless.

    Frank didn't even glance around him, he knew where he was going. He didn't care about what happened, all he wanted was to get home and get laid. When at last he arrived at his doorstep, he barged the door open and headed for the bedroom.

    Like usual, he was to sneak into bed while Tabatha got ready in the bathroom that was linked to the bedroom. While he removed his trousers, he didn't think about anything, just continued like a robot.

    In the other room, Tabatha stripped off her top and skirt. She was nearly done when she heard a tapping noise. Suddenly curious, she listened closely. The tapping noise was getting louder every second. It was as if something were moving closer to her. Ignoring the sound, she stripped the remaining of her garments when a hand tapped her on her back. She screamed, and Frank came rushing ini the room, already naked. What he saw was his last vision ever.

    As police inspected the bodies, they didn't notice a soft tapping noise, fading away.
     
  2. Don't make any role plays. Do not start spamming Fan Fiction. No Off Topic material belongs here.
     
  3. Thanks for your input, now piss off
     
  4. No. You piss off. You ate notorious here, everyone except your butt buddies like you here.
     
  5. I'm just amused that anyone would think I would spam fan fiction
     
  6. Feather,
    Anon,

    Go piss on eachother near a wall. After that, apologize to eachother. Then be even and be friends

    Feather, this is a story, not a roleplay.
    Anon,
    [​IMG]
     
  7. That is until u realise feather thinks everything I post in off topic is the same as in here
     
  8. You've done it before. You have so many strikes it's not even funny. That's why I sporadically farm you. Mech, you are relatively new so you really need to kinda...nicely butt out. I know it's a story but I just wanted to make things clear.
     
  9. I have never spammed fan fiction and I never will.
     
  10. I have people who can vouch for this. You have spanned Fan Fiction.
     
  11. That makes sense, since I've only made say, 5 threads in fan fiction
     
  12. Sure does don't it ;)
     
  13. I'll go search how many posts I've made in fan fiction
     
  14. 189 posts on fan fiction. the only things ive actually posted more than once are bump and lol and they r all on different threads and seperated
     
  15. and 6 threads made in fan fiction
     
  16. Chapter 1 - Schoolyard Embarrassments

    Jay watched as the second hand of the clock ticked away. There were three minutes left of school, and he was busting to pee. He was seriously panicking, he could hardly keep it in any longer. As usual, Ms Riles was going on about the medieval period, but Jay heard nothing at all. 3:59. 30 more seconds. Sweat was rolling off his head and he could feel his legs shaking. 5. 4. 3. 2. 1.

    The school bell rang loudly and Ms Riles pit down her marker. "Class dismissed!" she yelled. Jay ran out of the building, bumping into many people. He suddenly realized that the toilets were on the other side of the school, two minutes away if he ran. He wouldn't be able to make it there in time.

    Jay immediately detoured behind the infants building, shoved down his pants, held his **** loosely between his hands and let his muscles relax. The relied surges through Jay's body and he sighed as the stress drifted away.

    He heard a soft giggling voice behind him and turned his head around. Standing there was Cassandra, a girl in his class. Blushing, Jay turned away.

    "Shut up Cassandra."

    Cassandra flicked her head and her light blonde hair covered her deep green eyes for a second.

    "You really needed to go so badly? Couldn't make it to the toilet?"

    Jay ignored her and shut his eyes, hiding the dark brown in them. Behind him, Cassandra kept talking.

    "You left so fast that you didn't even realize Kenna was calling you."

    Jay turned around, answering, "she was?"

    "Yes she was, and when you didn't even turn around, her face looked so upset. She obviously thought this meant you didn't like her."

    Jay rolled his eyes, "she would".

    "What's the matter? Don't you care about her? Don't you want her kissing your light brown hair?"

    "Cassandra, shut up!"

    "And you're peeing on your foot."

    The sudden realization made Jay blush immediately. "Why would you care?" he shouted at her. "Why are you even here, staring at my ****!"

    Cassandra smiled and answered, "Actually, why am I? It's so small I shouldn't be interested."

    Jay shouted, "as if you can talk!"

    "What's that supposed to mean?"

    Jay realized what he had just said. He couldn't tell her that he had been watching her the other day, from a hole in wall behind the girl's toilets. "Nothing," he mumbled quietly.

    "You should have more respect, Jay. You can't possibly be hinting we are the weaker sex, can you?"

    "Of course not!" Jay shouted.

    "And you should work on your anger issues. Also, why are you still standing in front of me, your **** exposed?"

    Jay realized this and immediately pulled his pants up. Cassandra giggled again.

    "What's the matter? Are you ashamed of your small **** that you don't want me to see it?"

    "What about you then?" Jay retorted?

    Cassandra stared at Jay with interest. "You aren't hinting you want to see mine, are you?"

    "Wha... No!" Jay yelled embarrased.

    "Well if you do, it won't be free!" Cassandra said in a merrily tone.

    "I don't see why, since you've already seen my ****"

    "Still, nobody shows the other gender their dignity on purpose, unless something is in it for them."

    Jay thought carefully. "Ten bucks then," he challenged.

    "Do you think I'm stupid enough to let you see my ****** for ten bucks?"

    "A hundred then."

    "Nope"

    "A thousand!" Jay yelled recklessly.

    Cassandra giggled again. "Deal," she concluded, and skipped away happily.

    Jay stood still, thinking to himself, "Oh boy."
     
  17. This is actually a great story. some grammar issues here and there...more like conventions and punctuation but it's amazing!
     
  18. Maybe I should bump the age rating up
     
  19. Chapter 2 - Money in the Thousand

    Jay walked up to a short by with black hair. "Hey Tomas! You got a thousand bucks I could borrow?"

    Tomas looked at him with his black eyes, "Got the money, can't lend it to you though."

    "Can you give me some money?"

    "Yep, what do you need a thousand bucks for?"

    "I made a deal with Cassandra, if I give her a thousand bucks, she would show me her ******."

    Tomas stared at Jay, "Are you really that desperate?"

    Jay blushed, "Um no, but she was making fun of my **** so I started arguing back and she teased me because she thinks I haven't seen her ****** and can't argue back. Then I got sort of carried off and agreed to pay a thousand bucks."

    Tomas stared more, "You showed her your ****?"

    "No, she saw it herself."

    "You really need to watch where you **********."

    Jay sighed, "Nevermind, do you have any money?"

    Tomas reached in his pocket, "I'm rich, I always have money." He handed Jay $200.

    "Thanks man."

    "Any chance you could take pictures?" Tomas asked with a wide grin.

    "Tomas, shut up."

    Tomas laughed loudly as he walked off.

    Jay thought to himself, "Maybe I could think up a way to make money."

    Jay went home and found hundreds of old comics. "Great," he thought, "just what I need." Carrying the comic books over to the side of the road, Jay thought that he would be able to sell a lot of them.

    As he expected, many kids came to buy comics. He was selling them at $1 a comic, and after he had counted he found out he had exactly 500 comics. After half an hour, he sold out. "Great, now I need $300 more," he thought to himself.

    As he was walking home, he saw a crowd gathered around a stall. As Jay moved closer, he could see that the crowd was watching a performance. It was a joke competition. The prize was $300. Jay couldn't believe his luck.

    Registering in the competition was easy, now he had to think up some jokes. It was his turn, and as he got on the stage, he could think of nothing. So he searched his brain furiously, but he still couldn't find anything. And now he his **** was thing really bad.

    "Can I leave?" he asked the audience.

    The crowd booed.

    "I seriously need to leave," Jay told the audience.

    The crowd booed again.

    "No, I seriously need to leave, my **** is itching and I gotta go scratch it."

    The crowd fell silent. Jay tried to think of something, but what was worse was he was getting a really big erection. He tried to hide it from the crowd but a small girl around 6 suddenly yelled, "Hey! He's got a tennis ball in his pants!"

    The crowd immediately started laughing and Jay blushed. But the crowd kept laughing and suddenly the noise recorded went of the charts. The judge yelled, "Well, it looks like you won even though you didn't do anything."

    "Thanks!" Jay shouted and grabbed the money and left. He immediately hid behind the school and started scratching his ****. He heard a soft gigging voice behind him, it was Cassandra.

    "Well, how are you going Jay?" she teased him.

    "Shut up," Jay retorted, "I've got the thousand bucks!"

    Cassandra giggled again. "You do? Well where is it?"

    "Right here," Jay said taking out the money from his pocket.

    Cassandra took the money eagerly from Jay's hands.

    "And now for your side of the deal," Jay yelled.

    Cassandra's face turned solemn. "Ah well," she sighed.

    Cassandra pulled down her skirt slowly, and then took off her underwear. Jay stared. He saw the smooth edges like he did before from the hole, only this time he had a better view. Involuntarily, he reached out. Cassandra immediately grabbed his hand.

    "I said looking, not touching" she scolded, her face crimson.

    Jay ignored her and used his other hand and reached out. Cassandra rolled her eyes but did nothing to stop him. Jay felt the smooth texture and suddenly snapped out of the trance he didn't know he was in.

    "Well, I'll be off then," Cassandra whispered, and pulled up her underwear and skirt, skipping away from Jay merrily. Jay stared after her.

    That night, Jay lay in his bed, with his eyes open, thinking about Cassandra and her ******.