It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. This is the feedback thread for "It's A Long Story". Comments, critique, questions, etc are welcome. :)
     
    #1 Allioss, Aug 8, 2011
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    #2 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 8, 2011
  3. Thank you! 
     
    #3 Allioss, Aug 8, 2011
  4. Amazing story so far! I like the "How do you know what happens in twilight?" dis.


    That made me lol.




    Also, thanks for mentioning my character already. Can't wait to see how you put him in.
     
    #4 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  5. It's really good, so far 
     
    #5 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 8, 2011
  6. You actually put a picture no one has done that here before!
     
    #6 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 8, 2011
  7. 
     
    #7 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 8, 2011
  8. I already know who the storyteller is: She's the "Poizenuz Pheingz" woman.
     
    #8 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  9. I was actually thinking of putting a picture some time in my story. You beat me to it. :(
     
    #9 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  10. Thank you so much for the comments! I'm glad that people are enjoying it :) and Phoenix, pffft I have no idea what you're talking about >_>
     
    #10 Allioss, Aug 8, 2011
  11. You know that no self-respecting man watches twilight... Right?


    Also, keep the chapters coming! I LOVE IT!
     
    #11 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  12. Lololol :'D I love it!
     
    #12 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 8, 2011
  13. Maybe Modern Geoff has a girlfriend? (Dun dun duuun)
     
    #13 Allioss, Aug 8, 2011
  14. o_O please not me XD lololol idc :'D
     
    #14 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 8, 2011
  15. No it can't be Tessaria, she's in [name of world that has Poiz, Kakarias, Wolfie, etc] and Geoff's on Earth :p Any ideas from the readers on who I should make Poiz's love interest? 
     
    #15 Allioss, Aug 8, 2011
  16. -gasps- THE STORY TELLER!
     
    #16 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 8, 2011
  17. Though what about medieval geoff? There is one right?

















    Or are these worlds really connected 
     
    #17 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  18. Lol X98 u just wasted lots o space
     
    #18 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 8, 2011
  19. Well, they are, obviously. The storyteller is obviously the vampire.



    Or maybe the two worlds are alternate, and there are two of everyone. One in the earth 2011 world and one in the fantasy world.
     
    #19 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  20. Idk
     
    #20 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 8, 2011
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