Invisible

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *cheddarman7 (01), Dec 22, 2010.

  1. I was walking down the road
    And felt a touch
    I turned and saw nothing
    But I heard invisible

    I asked him "why
    Hide yourself in such a manner?
    Why not reveal who you are
    Open to others?"

    He spoke softly, "but
    Why? Life is the same as though I
    Do not exsit, why should I burden others
    More with myself" an he left

    While continuing down the road
    I thought to myself
    Why, why not reveal yourself but then
    I saw, that it is not him, but others
    Who shall not open ears

    Hey, this is my first peom I'm posting, please leave some feed back on what u think
     
    #1 *cheddarman7 (01), Dec 22, 2010
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    #2 *cheddarman7 (01), Dec 22, 2010
  3. I can make letters invisible can u see this?
     
    #3 *Dude1011 (01), Dec 22, 2010
  4. yes. ever think about ppl who r on pc
     
    #4 *Kimber03 (01), Dec 22, 2010
  5. I wrote after that but it's invisible!
     
    #5 *Dude1011 (01), Dec 22, 2010
  6. i liked it
     
    #6 XxXllllll-Sephiroth-llllllXxX, Dec 22, 2010
  7. .
     
    #7 *cheddarman7 (01), Dec 23, 2010
  8. It good
     
    #8 Nanocrafter, Dec 23, 2010
  9. This is KAW. We are simple minded button pushers. This is too deep. I need to push buttons.


     
    #9 *4Justice (01), Dec 23, 2010
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