Hey guys I'm writing again and please if you're going to tell me my crammer sucks. Just don't read the story, and for those who like my story. I try I really do try
Ok, no. I agree, your grammar does suck, but that isn't what bothers me. What bothers me is that you've made so many of these story threads, and how short have the actual stories been? Make no more threads. Use this one as your ongoing story one. Do not make another thread.
As I walked towards the school I reflected upon my mission, my mission was to find my target. Pressumably a innocent teenaged boy, trick him into loving me, and then lead him to my stepdad. My stepdad is a messed up guy, a little over the forty's and definately not in his best years being short fat and out of shape. Well he was all I had since my mom passed away. He never liked me he just wanted to use me, I dont k ow how he tricked my mom into marrying him but he is on of the stupidest meanest cowardliest men I have ever met. He even forces me to do his dirty work. Well my dad is a slave dealer, he has me catch people take them to him and he and his going friends ship him or her over the seas to some slave trading place. Yes its illegal and yes I hate doing it but hey what choice do I have, well occasionally I tip of the culprit and let him get away but my evil stepdad will then punish me, well move me away make me miss schoolmate starve me, and sometimes beat me,but I can bear it I would rather nothave innocent kids be shipped of to slavery One time I tried to get away using my sword but my stepdad caught me and hurt me so badly that I haven't tried again. But I will try as soon as I am strong enough. Right now I content myself with practicing My swordsmanship and getting stronger.
I quit the forgotten star of aeraeol because of idiots like you and the lost stars of aeraeol was a longer book then any book that ive ever seen completes on fan fiction also the other book I wrote was just a stupid book I wrote because people made me mad. Please get off my forum
It's a thread. And I'm not attempting to insult you, other people may be a lot worse. Also, you have no right to kick me off, read rules of conduct. You obviously haven't read any other FF stories because 90% of them are longer. Once again, all I ask of you is to keep your stories on this one thread, or make a thread called, "(I'm sorry I forgot your name.)'s Short Stories" and post them all on there. All I ask.
Chapter 1 As I walked towards my highschool I saw my target walking towards the door of the school, he was about 6.3 with short black hair blue eyes and a strong body. As he walked through the door I ran to catch up with him. Hello,my names
Chapter 1 As I walked towards my highschool I saw my target walking towards the door of the school, he was about 6.3 with short black hair blue eyes and a strong body. As he walked through the door I ran to catch up with him. Hello, my name is Emily I said as I caught up to him "hey have I seen tu somewhere?" he asked me, No, I said "definately not". Ok he said and he walked off to his first class. The rest of the school day was uneventful except that I got detention for being late, but towards the end of school a pretty little Blondel came up to me menecingly "hey new junk how would you like
Ok, I'm not telling u your grammar sucks,(and it does), but u need longer posts, longer than 5 sentences per chapter
Well your grammar probably sucks but I like your stories and my grammar is so bad I can't even notices so when they say "it hurts to read it your grammar is so bad" I can read it just fine
Just trying to help. I respect that you're trying. I remember when I first came to FF. it was a nightmare