Inevitable Fate Feedback/ Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Croluxian, Dec 18, 2010.

  1. Well i just wrote the first chapter while in bed. No preparation for this story. I got a few ideas going about but they are for later on in the story. Hope you like it!
     
    #1 Croluxian, Dec 18, 2010
  2. Good job so far๎€Ž
     
    #2 iNomNom, Dec 18, 2010
  3. Great start Cro!
     
    #3 Storallelite, Dec 18, 2010
  4. Chapter 2 out now!
     
    #4 Croluxian, Dec 19, 2010
  5. Nice!;)
     
    #5 *lady-marian (01), Dec 19, 2010
  6. ๎€Ž
     
    #6 Storallelite, Dec 19, 2010
  7. Next parts out!!!
    Btw sorry for double post
     
    #7 Croluxian, Dec 21, 2010
  8. i like it but i thought the transition from frozen in fear to shooting fire was a bit to abrupt


    otherwise good story
     
    #8 Renatum, Dec 21, 2010
  9. ๎€Ž
     
    #9 Storallelite, Dec 21, 2010
  10. Chapter 4 out now!!
     
    #10 Croluxian, Dec 23, 2010
  11. Aww poor Marty thought Lynn like him! Lol good job so far
     
    #11 iNomNom, Dec 23, 2010
  12. Yay! Good chapter, Lol poor Matt.
     
    #12 Storallelite, Dec 23, 2010
  13. Lol ty guys
     
    #13 Croluxian, Dec 23, 2010
  14. Man u know how to weight
     
    #14 *lord_of_terror (01), Feb 13, 2011
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