Thanks everyone! And irin? What is my writing style? And while we're on the topic, how can you tell if you have a writing style? Thanks again!
Hmmm...writing style...it kinda like your way with words. Word placemeant, vocabulary, things like that. The better the flow of words, the btter the style, in my oppinion, anyway. Does that help?
Very good. Your writing style... It's a nature third person inside their mind kinda story. This is the style I wanted for Dragon Fire, but I'm a first person style writer. Dangit, I love how easy you make it seem with a third person narrative, yet, I envy you as well since it seems like second nature to you . iZaln
Thanks Zaln! I'm not sure how well I do with first person. I wrot a 10,000 word story in first last month (not as hard as it seems!) and I think I start my sentences with "I" too much. Hmmm.... Maybe being a natural at third person has to do with my referring to myself in third person a lot, Lady-Marian thought with a calculating look.
Lol. I adore first person since you can really get to know the character, but it's at a disadvantage since you can't see anything about another character's personality. The reason I used third person for Dragon Fire was to be a little more professional since it was more of a challenge constructing the right wordage. But anyhow, I love first and third. iZaln PS: iZaln notices that you are mocking him. "Hmmm," so says he.
I may have written this story in first person, but there's more than one main character, so I just chose third. "Who's mocking who?" Lady-Marian says with a look of innocence in her eyes, but her smile gives her away.
I love writing and reading in third. But it is a pain when you want to switch P.O.V's. I try conquering that by making it like the main character it observing what's happening but isn't really there. It doesn't seem to work though. And Irin thinks that both lady and zaln sound funny when talking like this.
Maybe it's just because I'm a guy, but when I saw the title, "In the Dark" I thought, "and under the sheets!"
I meant to say first, not third. Mistakes like these happen when your tired. G'night lady! I should probably get some sleep too.
Irin wonders why izaln is looking at her in a strange way, but is too tired to ask why he is doing that. Her thoughts drift to something absurd, like bubble gum and horsies. Irin has learned that many times her thoughts seem to wonder when she is sleep deprived.
iZaln logs into KaW forums and sees Irin's above post. He thinks in his mind, Whoa... What kind of mind does she have? An absured on, a voice in his mind says. About to agree, iZaln catches himself. "I ought to be careful," he whispers to himself, traumatized for no reason at all. iZaln