I'm planning on making a book so give me ur opinions here

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *shaqson (01), Oct 14, 2010.

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  1. So here's what I got so far

    9021, Im henery b. Anthony I live on planet 551 in sector b12. My friend that always kept my chin up and was always sticking up was kidnaped by strangeen when we were flying to sector b13 to the store because my it was my moms birthday. I'll go back to when strange things started happening to him about a year ago.....
     
    #1 *shaqson (01), Oct 14, 2010
  2. Spellcheck....








































































    Get it
     
    #2 XxDukeOfTacosxX, Oct 14, 2010
  3. This book will suck
     
    #3 soldierlion, Oct 14, 2010
  4. A muse. Get one.
     
    #4 Niuean, Oct 14, 2010
  5. :ugeek: my opinion is that men hate girls and only think of them as sex toys
     
    #5 JJ_R, Oct 14, 2010
  6. Jk jk lol :geek:
     
    #6 JJ_R, Oct 14, 2010
  7. Not that kind of opinion and go f urself soldier lion
     
    #7 *shaqson (01), Oct 14, 2010
  8. Yeah. Like random. *points at the other guy*
     
    #8 Niuean, Oct 14, 2010
  9. It doesn't sound very appealing or interesting at all, you didn't hook me.
     
    #9 XxDukeOfTacosxX, Oct 14, 2010
  10. Me too sorry.
    B12 is a vitamin in bananas btw.
     
    #10 Niuean, Oct 14, 2010
  11. Ya, I take B12 medicine every morning lol
     
    #11 XxDukeOfTacosxX, Oct 14, 2010
  12. Ya, I take B12 medicine every morning lol
     
    #12 XxDukeOfTacosxX, Oct 14, 2010
  13. Well srry for trying
     
    #13 *shaqson (01), Oct 14, 2010
  14. It's okay we forgive you. :3
     
    #14 *RikaTsukikai (01), Oct 14, 2010
  15. U guys r a bunch of jurks I'm a BEGINNER in not a proffesional author I'm a BEGINNER so did I mention that I'm a BEGINNER!!!!!!
     
    #15 *shaqson (01), Oct 14, 2010
  16. Yes I believe. 3 or 4 times.


    overkill much
     
    #16 CoS-Dillybar, Oct 14, 2010
  17. Be respectful guys, what if one of your stories was being criticized in this manner. You wouldn't care for it either, plus it doesn't help him get any better
     
    #17 colonial, Oct 14, 2010
  18. I have spoken
     
    #18 colonial, Oct 14, 2010
  19. :eek: it's col
     
    #19 CoS-Dillybar, Oct 14, 2010
  20. De we mention you cant spell? Going to the store isnt really exciting....now if people were getting killed by say...futuristic weapons and there was a war going on people would be more interested.
     
    #20 XxXllllll-Sephiroth-llllllXxX, Oct 14, 2010
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