I'm normal, just an everyday superhero feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010.

  1. Ok here is the feedback thread for my and lady marians story pls post your thoughts
     
    #1 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  2. Good so far. Keep it coming!
     
    #2 SPOT_the_Samurai, Sep 11, 2010
  3. Haven't seen it yet... POST IT ON THE WEBSITE!!! note to self: add stories section to the forums
     
    #3 ALinkToTheFuture, Sep 11, 2010
  4. Thanks
     
    #4 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  5. It's fantastic! Keep up the great work!
     
    #5 Porygod, Sep 11, 2010
  6. Thanks 
     
    #6 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  7. Bump
     
    #7 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  8. Bump
     
    #8 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  9. New chapter!
     
    #9 *lady-marian (01), Sep 11, 2010
  10. Wow we fail lol
     
    #10 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  11. Not bad. A few grammar issues, but nothing major. This looks to be a well developed plot.
     
    #11 *Irin (01), Sep 11, 2010
  12. Thanks the fact of two writers helps alot to
     
    #12 Mr_Bluejay, Sep 11, 2010
  13. It's fab
     
    #13 *cupcake96 (01), Sep 11, 2010
  14. I is liking
     
    #14 german_idiot, Sep 11, 2010
  15. Wow u tlk like a German idiot too!!!
     
    #15 *cupcake96 (01), Sep 11, 2010
  16. So.....ur a bug
     
    #16 german_idiot, Sep 11, 2010
  17. Lol!
     
    #17 *lady-marian (01), Sep 11, 2010
  18. 
     
    #18 *lady-marian (01), Sep 11, 2010
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