I'm new to the fan fic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Requital, Jan 8, 2012.

  1. Hey guys! I'm new to this part of forums and just felt like sharing some of my stuff. Hope you enjoy!
    Retribution
    Retribution never looked so divine
    A broken creed at the end of the line
    The twisted soul of an exile
    No longer will I feed the denial
    A shattered life as recompense
    You don't know the meaning of intense
    Secrets buried in the dark of the night
    What's done in the dark is brought to light
    and the night is darkest before dawn
    I'll walk the face of the sun
    Breakdown
    I'll be the one to taste your tears
    I'll be the one to test your fears
    I'll be the one to take the fall
    I'll be the only one to fake it all

    Chrous: Watch me as I walk the sun
    Don't blink cause it's death, because it's death
    Run and hide I know you will
    You can run forever
    But you'll never be, you'll never be free
    ima walk the face of the sun

    Your a dead beat **** tard son of *****
    Your A little ******* rat bastard bathe you in the blood of a pig,
    Because then maybe you feel the dirt you've caused
    Literally not figuratively bc we all know it's a facade
    Oh I'm gonna burn your life like you burn you lr bridges down
    I'm going to walk the face of the sun
    Breakdown
    I'll be the one to taste your tears
    I'll be the one to test your fears
    I'll be the one to take the fall
    I'll be the only one to fake it all

    Chorus

    Burn the candle at both ends
    No forgiveness no recompense
    You sewed the seeds now reap the reward
    Your dirty honor will die at my sword
    The match just burned your fingertips
    Dust of the whirlwind still lingers at my lips
    One way or another Youll come undone
    I'll walk the face of the sun
    Breakdown
    I'll be the one to taste your tears
    I'll be the one to test your fears
    I'll be the one to take the fall
    I'll be the only one to fake it all

    Chorus x2
    I'll walk the Face of the sun x2
    Walk the face
     
  2. Is this a song?
    looks good
     
  3. Yeah Its a song, and thanks I'll post more if y'all want
     
  4.  I look forward to seeing more of your work! :)
     
  5. Ok I have an archive of some things, I'll post a couple and go from there, I have a wide genre of music I write and I do some poems as well :)
     
  6. . Cardiac Resusitation

    Long days turn into longer nights
    desolation spreads like wildfire
    ignite
    turn on the light
    shine on my burial site
    can i survive?
    can i survive?
    can i survive this plight?
    suddenly a new resolution
    retribution for my hearts execution
    this is my declaration
    no more trepidation
    no more reconciliation
    no more speculation
    only total annihilation
    i will exterminate this abomination
     
  7. Feel free to post your own :)