Imma rate your stories. Post the title, and I'll search for it. Ill try to rate it a day from your post at most.
The Maid of Ycha. Ipitydahooka The Maid of Ycha is a beautiful story. The flow is brilliant, as is the description. But I feel that there were a lot of uneccesary words, maybe too many sometimes. The grammar is good, not great, bur good. Great job Ipitydahooka, you are a good writer.
Wizardry World LEGENDaRY LIoN(sry I'm o iPod) I'm sorry, but I'll have to be blunt. It needs work. There is little to know description, and not very interesting adjectives. But the chapters are better increasing in depth and description. Keep going lion, you have a bright future ahead of you.
Salvation is Fleeting Klassik (=1/2) I like the idea. I haven't been a critic for long, but I know a good story when I see one. The only thing is that I don't think you explain well enough. You also need an editor or go over your story when you are done. I look forward to seeing more Klassik
Doom: If you don't like my rating, I dont care. Im new, and inexperienced. My ratings will get better.
From my amateur critquing. Lady-Marian Battle Camp Series My favorite story yet. The way the words are woven together in an elegant way, adding grammar and everything else. It hooks the reader, reels them in, an catches them. But then it gently let's go. Nice job.
Ok I will make my ratings tougher from now on though. CheeseMuffin Fading Fast A very nice story indeed! There is always a twist to the story, and it captivated the reader. You have to work on your wording. That's about all I can call to mind right now.
Question! For my next story, should I just have you all wait then I write the whole story, or release it chapter by chapter?
Chapter by chapter. Better to correct mistakes as you go along. That's what I do. PS - just try to make it a little bit faster and it'll be fine