I Will- Unedited

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *5-_IIllI_WhySoSerious_IlIlI_-5 (01), Dec 17, 2012.

  1. So I found this side of forums, Fan Fiction, earlier this afternoon, and I thought I would share a piece of literature I wrote earlier this year. No trolling please, all feedback welcome. Especially changes I should make, for this is (as said in Subject area) an Unedited Version

    I Will

    I will never give up on something I believe in,

    I will push on through the hard times,

    I will not let others weaken me, may it be mean students or disapproving teachers,

    I will turn my back on the things that can distract me from my goal,

    I will not let people do something to me that I do not approve of.

    I will not be bullied,

    I will not be treated as though I do not belong,

    I will not be fazed as I push past the mean remarks from my fellow students,

    I will not change to meet another person's standards,

    I will live life to the fullest,

    I will forgive but won't forget,

    I will give it my all, no matter what the costs,

    and no matter what happens,

    I Will Love




    Feedback Welcome
     
    #1 *5-_IIllI_WhySoSerious_IlIlI_-5 (01), Dec 17, 2012
  2. OUTSTANDING!
     
    #2 Come_Inside, Dec 17, 2012
  3. Thanks; this is OP's alt (OP is on a computer, easier to type on a mobile device) if you couldn't tell I was bullied as a middle school student and so when I shared this in front of the class everyone was... shocked
     
    #3 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 17, 2012
  4. Lol u better get off KAW and start doing push-ups and stop getting bullied.
     
    #4 Come_Inside, Dec 17, 2012
  5. As a middle schooler*** I thought I said that. Now im a Junior and, well, I beat up the bullies xD
     
    #5 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 17, 2012
  6. Bump; please give feedback on how to make it better :)
     
    #6 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 17, 2012
  7. Well **** no one likes my poem...
     
    #7 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 18, 2012
  8. hopefully you will mutter that under your breath after you've had a breath mint...
     
    #8 MM__WhineyCrybaby__MM, Dec 18, 2012
  9. Hush up, Mork.

    It's probably not that no one likes it. Not many care to comment on a thread with one item.
     
    #9 *NovaFolium (01), Dec 18, 2012
  10. What do you mean a thread with one item? Im kinda new to this whole section
     
    #10 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 18, 2012
  11. [​IMG]
     
    #11 -Phenoix_Machine-, Dec 18, 2012
  12. Thanks phenoix I love looking at 13 year olds hip thrust repeatedly
     
    #12 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Dec 18, 2012
  13. I think it's beautiful. I can feel the strength in you through the words, and I hope this inspires anyone else being bullied to have the strength of will like you.
     
    #13 Nouveau, Dec 21, 2012
  14. Dude your poem is free verse its amazing and I can relate to it so it gives me a connection to real life situations
     
    #14 *Radio_Rebel13 (01), Dec 22, 2012
  15. thanks... I loved writing this piece.
     
    #15 *5-_IIllI_WhySoSerious_IlIlI_-5 (01), Dec 25, 2012
  16. Love it!!!! It so good!
     
    #16 *elaname (01), Dec 31, 2012
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