why did he think Im dirt when I make cities why does she think Im a freak when I have the hands of craft men why does he think I will die alone when I give love to poor why didn't get the girl I like when I made my cities from scratch but it didn't changed at the fight I did but Ill tell you that later.
Prologue:I saw the students use to laugh a me but now respect me my dream actualy came true it was a happy day.
This looks like it will be interesting!! In the first paragraph, one thing that I saw was that it needed was question marks at the end of each sentence. ^-^
look I don't want trouble."I said."oh your gonna get it."he said as he threw a punch a another kicked my leg I cried in pain I then heard a crack and it was my knee."OWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!"I screamed in pain.they all started to run to not get in trouble.
When people are talking, make a new paragraph when the speaker changes. Like this: "Hello," he said. "Hi, Joe! How are you?" She replied. "Good." He said happily. That will help clear it up, and makes it also easier to read.
"WHY DID YOU DO THAT"!!!!! I cried out.I started to sob over my knee.I started to be full of tears screaming crawling as I crawled to the door.
"why did you do that?"I asked. "your everyone's punching bag."he replied. "oh yeah."I said.I threw a fist he then jumped and threw a fist and then picked me and threw me hard I then tried to get up but it was too hard
Could you bring back a few brain cells when you do come back, so you can explain exactly what that gibberish is you just spewed .....
@op what are you trying to do with this thread? Please elaborate why and for what purpose did you create this thread
Now Ill happley explain it now he's a nerd with no respect and he then gets the respect and I made the thread because Im trying again to make a story but failed again