Ethan Kradov walked down the hill noticing the many cars crowding the school. A cool breeze came by doing nothing about the heat. Ethan was a tall boy with brown hair and a well muscled body. He walked down and finally saw the huge amount of people. He saw his dad President Kradov giving a speech. He ran down and got his car waiting for his dad to be done.
Can you give more details why is his dad at the school? Also try and post longer sections no one cares about a 2 sentence a day story also try and get in the main plot soon because that's what makes it interesting.