How Sporavek's Revenge got created

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ViciousImpact, Jun 9, 2012.

  1. 1995:
    It was late afternoon. I was taking a walk with my dog in the forest. I wasn't really looking where I was going. Thump! Me, being a klutz, just got plowed by a tree. "Ow". I rubbed my forehead. Suddenly I heard a groaning sound. I looked up, and to my horror, saw a red eyed, evil, mega tree! I thought i was hallucinating at first. I rubbed my eyes. It was still there. Did I just wake it up? I wondered. The tree growled. I could see a little, tiny engraving on it that said Sporavek. His teeth was as sharp as a knife. Suddenly he lifted his arm, and tried to chop me in half! U grabbed my knife from my pocket and called over my troops. Sporavek swung his sharp arms around at wicked speed, knocking down soldiers and spy's each time. I charged at him. He picked up a HUGE log at chucked it at me. I ducked, and kept charging. His arms were spinning like a hurricane! Then, I found a small opening in his upper body. Quickly, I snuck my knife in there. Sporavek howled in pain. Blood gushed from his chest. But he kept on killing soldiers. He should've died from that! I thought. A couple of my soldiers got their machine guns and started rapid-firing at Sporavek. Each hit made Sporavek weaker. Then, when he was just about to die, he threw a giant tree at me.
    Then I blacked out.
    After half an hour I was awake again, to see that my soldiers had destroyed Sporavek. I noticed a nasty cut in my ribs. It will heal, I told myself.

    17 years later (2012):
    Deep in the forest, a strong soul was reappearing. It's presence was now more feared, and it got a LOT stronger.
    Sporavek was awaking again. And he wanted revenge on the Kingdoms. He walked to my home and with a crash! He banged right through my house. When I saw the same Sporavek engraving on his body I knew this was trouble. "what the-! I thought I killed you!" I shouted nervously. Sporavek, who was now even stronger, used his muscular arms to sway away my charging soldiers. I grabbed my knife (it was know longer and sharper) and got ready to put some hurting' on Sporavek. I did a stupid thing, that might've costed me my life. I threw my knife at Sporavek. He laughed as the knife came hurtling in. He tried to catch it, but it was so sharp and I threw it with such speed, it broke his arms and went to his chest.
    Boom!
    My soldiers kept attacking, and my spy's kept spying. Sporavek kept killing them and chucking trees. But after 11 hours of hardcore fighting, Sporavek, was dead
    THE END!
     
  2. How u guys think?
     
  3. God damn it their goes 1 minute of my life wasted.
     
  4. I gave u Fan Fiction!
     
  5. Put more detail into it but good
     
  6. Coldplay shut up this is a bunch of crap just like your stories.
     
  7. What the hell is this!?
     
  8. Nope. Nada. Нет. Nein.
    It sucks.
     
  9. Where is dbo when u need him....
     
  10. This is stupendous, mystifying, astonishing! Just one small thing....












    Crap is much better than this.
     
  11. And my mom's a *****