Hell rising

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Burningclaw, Dec 19, 2010.

  1. Hell rising
    My name is Patrick, my life basically ended when he returned...His name was Phillip he was my freind until today.The day started out as a normal day, I got dressed and walked to the bus. As usual I got on, but somthing was different. My freind all said :Hi are you the new student?I countered :No I know all of you stop messing around.
    "we don't know you."
    "but I know all of you"
    Then I list there names, and that is when my life changed for good...

    Entree.II
    The roof of the bus was torn of by what looked like a chicken with a bad hair due. But no one appeared to see, I was taken aback. The thing appeared to have three eyes all red, glaring right at me. I tried to not look so it wouldn't see that it was me, but as if it could read my mind like a book, it swooped down and grabbed me. I could think of a million things I would rather due then be lifted out of my bus bye a over grown 
    chicken.

    Entree.III
    Oh god I thought why is it always me, I get bullied, I have my homework stolen, I get kidnaped by a chicken,A CHICKEN of all the things a chicken. Wait...Its a harpy. We flew every where, but we stopped, and the harpy got someone else...Oh my lord I thought as I recognize my x-best friend Philip...He flailed and screamed as we got closer to our target. We where going to the grand canyon. When we arrived we were brutally dropped. As we free fell I felt lighter as we neared the floor. 

    Entree.IV
    When we hit the floor I felt dead, but I felt like I was still falling. Maybe after you die u feel the same way for eternity,but this time I hit water, or what seemed to be water it was warm and thick. I thought I was going to pass out when I learned what it was. It was blood, blood of the ones lost here. I saw a skull then I saw Phillip lying on the ground. I was the lucky one, Phillip was dead...

    Entree.V
    I wander what seemed like a millennia, until I found a light. I walked towards the light.As I got closer to the light I saw movement. I heard a low,long moan,I thought it was someone else trapped in this eternal waste land...but I saw it was Philip, I went to talk to him on how to get back when he charged me.I saw something different in his eyes not just was one missing but the other one was yellow. As I freaked out not knowing what was wrong with him.

    Entree.VI
    I grabbed the nearest bone, witch happened to be a spine and cut a gash in the monster. A then ran to the light of the "cave".When I got there I saw I was at the top of grand canyon. I turned to see Philip running at me. All I did was move and watch as he plummeted to the bottom of the Grande canyon. I thought:I need to get out of here...

    Entree.VII
    I walked, and walked,until I found civilization, but it was to late. I saw no one in the wall-mart, an I heard screams of a boy my age. I charged in his direction with the spine in my hands. One thing I learned that day is never run allot in Arizona. As I ran down the street and saw another horrific sight: Devin  was being chased bye three people. No monsters. I ran at one but it turned around and it broke my Weapon and hit me stomach and I slid across the concrete ground. As I puked up bile Devin ran to me and helped me up. We where fending off the attack of these weird creatures...

    Entree.VIII
    I saw a new type of monsters: it was what Devin called a "crawler" it was a monster on it's 4 feet, which had no eyes and a huge mouth with long serrated teeth. As I thought we were going to die a blade came down and killed the monsters. We heard a voice say:Follow me and you will live. So we did what anyone how wanted to live would do:we followed the plaited armor wearing ,scythe holder where ever he took us. We  ended up in a under ground house,and he fell down dead. I then saw what killed the masked person it was a crawler. It had stabbed his head and I did what he did to save me, I picked up the scythe ,and as I swung, I heard Devin's screams. Devin was killed like the owner of this scythe. I screamed in anger and killed the other crawlers. I then was surprised by the a voice. It said:put his armer on and his gauntlets. Then follow me...
    Book two is coming soon...