Hell on Earth Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Doctor_Fred_Weasley (01), Jun 20, 2011.

  1. Please post all feedback for Hell on Earth here.
     
  2. All the people will b in it. Eventually
     
  3. YES!




    muahahahaha.........
     
  4. Awesome story line U realize Gisei is a Boy right :p other than that good story but idk about the werewolf thing *cough*twilight
     
  5. Make sure u put karu in 2 she's Gisei's friend
     
  6. It's not about werewolves. If u got claws and started changing what would b ur first thought?? I hate twilight anyway so it's not twilight
     
  7. make Ignis show up in part 3......coming from nowhere.


    REMEMBER: he hardly talks. only talks when talked to.
     
  8. hmmmmmm......i like it so far.
     
  9. Sorry I changed Ignis a bit and karu may b a minor character later. Right now I kind of have the story worked out. I have to say chapter 5 is my fav
     
  10. AWESOME STORY
     
  11. I like how u switch between characters points of views
     
  12. Lol I know. I was laughing when I was typing that. Plus lindsey seems lioe a blonde (not to stereotype im blonde) and like the character who wpuld say that I like to switch the point of view because it gets boring with the same prospectives.
     
  13. Tell ur friends about my story