Heartless

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Oct 3, 2010.

  1. Heartless
    Written by- Arimay
    Type of book- fiction

    Quick note from author- Please do not post on this thread I will make a feed back thread soonly.

    Prologue-
    "Im one of you?" I asked stomping my foot at the words she spoke.
    "Yes, we created you Riku." The dark blue haired girl said smiling.
    "Im not heartless! I wouldn't be alive if I was!" I shouted pointing at her madly, this couldn't be, this never could! Things like this don't exist!
    "You see Riku, you are heartless. Why you ask? You were ment to do horrible things, that's why we made you heartless, so some day it will stop you if you ever do become evil." I listened to her words carefully, she wasn't explaining them right. I laid my hand on my chest and didn't feel a beat, what if I wa heartless?


    Chapter One
    "Huh!" I woke up from the strange dream I had. I looked out the window watching as birds flew by. I sighed, another day, I thought. I ran down stairs without getting breakfeast and walked outside.
    "Riku!" shouted Nallminine. Nallminine was a girl across from me, she was a nice young girl about my age.
    "Riku, what do ya say we go down to the sand lot for some fighting with Kay today?" she asked showing a big smile.
    "Maybe, I'm not much in the mood right now, I'll think about it." I said picking up a rock and throwing it at the ground.
    "Well alright, you think!" she said walking inside her home, I layed down in the grass wondering why I had so many weird dreams lately. Usually they were the same one, I was in a bright white room at a long white shiny table sitting in a matching chair to the table. There was a girl sitting on the other end, she had dark blue hair she was talking something but I kept protesting what he said. There was not sound to this conversation so I couldn't understand what we were saying. Yet again and again the same dream.
     
  2. This copies a game called kingdom hearts u did it 2 me so I'll do it to u . U can't write why would god make a loophole for one man who noobody loves when the whole uk loved princess diana did she come back?? No!! U can't write a footprint in the sand was the worst stop spamming forums so what if ur a eleven year old who gives a toss!!??
     
  3. Ur dumb heartless are mibsters in a book/game kingdom hearts and same charactes
     
  4. This is a completely different story it turns into a vampire story.
    Riku is heart less becase in the future some one turns him into a vampire and he wants blood but the people who created him try to stop him.
     
  5. Fine whatever delete this story.
     
  6. Create ur ideas dont steal em
     
  7. Poor airmay
     
  8. She deserves it
     
  9. Yah u copy this, even though u change it up. And it sucks. The game is better. QUIT COPYING EVERYTHING
     
  10. For all you hatin: it's a FAN FICTION! which means it uses characters and some situations from a current story and you make a completely different story with them.