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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Maisaka, Jul 14, 2012.

  1. Please post feedback here~
     
  2. Oooh cool! A football story! Keep posting more. Although they did loose to Italy in the Euros...

    iZaln
     
  3. Please read it T^T
     
  4. Me gusta sis love it keep writing
     
  5. Nice... Although I must say, are you a football fan or did you do research because there's some good information there. Nice job! Although it is odd to read this from a male POV 0.o... Nonetheless, I have to say though... MESSI IS WAY BETTER THAN ÖZIL! Lol just saying. Anyway, looking forward to more! 

    iZaln
     
  6. Lol actually it's from a girls POV(Mine). I'm actually German and I just tried to think what would soccer players would act-I always felt that Schweinsteiger would be joker while Podolski would be the flirt/softie
    I wrote the part with ozil being better than Messi at 12pm..I meant to say he is highly praised for being the German Messi
     
  7. It's grand but I'm not really sure where the story's going....
     
  8. I know, I'm taking it bit by bit.
    Also on the story forum some parts were reposted twice
     
  9. Lol well I meant as in that I'm a guy reader reading a story about a girl with German soccer players so I'm a little... Uhh... Lol anyways German Messi my assets lol :p I like Özil as a player (terrific on Real Madrid), and I think he's also a bit of a trickster, he does various... Tricks lol. One of them is spitting his gum out and then kicking it back up into his mouth, so maybe that says some part to his personality. I also read some stuff about Özil and how he acts in public and he's actually very shy and humble. On the German national team, his closest friend is Sami Khedira who does most of the talking for him.

    Just thought that information might be able to help when you write your story. Good luck !

    iZaln
     
  10. Okay thanks for the info; I'll make sure to make Ozi a tad shy and more withdrawn; I always assumed Sami and Ozi were friends >.< With that long hair ;3
     
  11. I updated the story :3 please please read it guys ;3
     
  12. <3 ozil sand u could just say it was a handball
     
  13. Me gusta on an edge, nice
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    -bellalautner
     
  14. I updated the story-please read and comment