HARRY POTTER:The next generation

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ZzxzZCANTBEMEZzXzZ, Sep 25, 2011.

  1. This was it. He was finally going to hogwarts. When he woke up that morning, he had already been packed. His father took his trunk out to the car. He told his brother, what do you do to get sorted into houses? All you have to do is try on a hat, he said. It is as easy as going to Madam Malkin's. Thanks Craig, I said. We drove to the station. I was afraid of going in between the barriers. But I managed it easily. I'm glad I didn't go to Hogwarts lat year. Last year Death Eaters took over the school, and Snape was Headmaster. Now Kingley Shacklebolt is Headmaster. Craig is a third year, so he gets to visit Hogsmeade(he said he'd bring me some honeydukes candy). I can't wait to get on the train. We had gotten there early, so they were some of the first on the train. He went to the last section of the train. In a short time, another first year had joined him. His name was Casey Blain. The train whistled. It was starting to move. The cart door opened, and HARRY POTTER stepped in! Behind him was Ron and Hermoine. He had heard that some of the last years 7th years were repeating the year. But HARRY POTTER was going to sit with him??!! Harry said"all the other seats are taken, can we sit here"? I nodded vigorously. I asked Harry if the Sorting hat hurt, and he said no. Soon, the trolley cart was there with snacks, and Harry bought the whole trolley. You must be rich!,I exclaimed. He nodded. Soon we were pulling into the station. I saw Hagrid yelling Firs' years over here, Firs' years. I went over to him, and got in the boat. Casey joined me, along with two oters I didn't know.
     
  2. QUOTATION MARKS PLEASE.
     
  3. puncuation?