"GET MOVING! NO SLACKING OFF, KEEP MINING THAT ORE! said the Foreman, "YOU HUMANS ARE THE SCUM OF THE GALAXY!" He cracked a laser whip, and an agonizing scream of dispair could be heard. A man fell to the ground limp, and gravely short of breath. Onlookers attempted to help him up, but were staved by the quarry guards. "Kill him, his usefulness is no more." scoffed the Foreman. "Make his death slow and painful. Let this be an example to all of you!" "GUARDS! TAKE AIM!!!!!" Foreman ordered, "READY..... FI....." Off in the distance a voice can be heard, "Caring as ever, huh Foreman?" the voice chuckles. "Who? Where?"Foreman cried frantically, "FORGET IT! KILL THIS SLAVE NOW!!" "Roger that sir!" the guards replied. The start pulling the weapons trigger...... A hail of laser blasts can be seen. The guards fall to the ground, and the miner crawls away. Foreman looks up, red with rage. "HOW DARE!..." his face goes a ghostly pale white. "Y-y-you.... I-it can't be!!"
He begins to shudder as the workers begin an uprise. "How is it possible? I saw the destruction of your kind!" he exclaims, "THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE!" "Just like the Empire to overlook the minute details." preached the figure. "As long as there is a conscious, an inteligent being, there is always hope, a dream, freedom!" Foreman begins to smirk, "well, with all your talk, do you have any power to liberate this galaxy?" With that a beam of light teleports him to an obiting cruiser, and the mine is pumbled with heavy fire from space. As the dust fades the mysterious figure stands alone, distraught with the scene before him. The mine lay barren, void of life. Machinery reduced to fragments, and bodies litter the ground. All is silent, not even a breeze stirs. "I-I can't believe this...." the figure chokes out, "I couldn't save them......." He falls to his knees, unable to fathom what just happened, he is unable to speak anymore. The ground around him begins to tremble and break.
"ARGH!! What's happening???" He cries out, "So much rage! I need to meditate...." He closes his eyes and slowly takes deep breath. The tremors cease, and everything is silent once more. He slowly gets to his feet and walks away from the mine. Unbeknownst to him a small shuttle was observing the scene, and began following him. He only notices the ship when it speeds up and stops infront of him and lands. A hatch drops down and a young womans silhouette appears in the ships light. "well, well! It looks like I have a young guardian in front of me." she cooed, "And by the looks of it, you're quite powerful." She begins to walk down the hatch with a suductive swagger. The young man starts to see more of her features.
It's awesome so far is there a feedback sumwhere or coming soon or r ppl just gonna write it's FAN-FICTION-TASTIC on the story thread