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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Oct 16, 2011.

  1. UPDATE: Sign ups are closed.

    UPDATE: I will accept only two more character sign ups! Only restriction is that one character must be within the age range of 19-22 and their connection is to the victim.(enemy or friend)
    One character must be in the age range of 24-25 and their connection is to the main character.(as a friend)

    Please note: These two may end up being side characters. Thankyou!


    So this is a story that I thought up while I was writing Atlantric: Unknown. It's a mystery story, the classic "detective" type and it's set in a fictional city/town in Britain. The time period is the present.
    That's all I can say or I'd ruin everything.
    I might not actually write this story due to being busy in RL and because this story is only half thought out so far.(Mostly because of this sign up)
    Anyway! If I do write this and you want your character to be in it sign up here! Because it's a mystery, the guidelines are very strict so read carefully! Thanks!


    What I need:

    Name: (Please make it a British name unless the character is an immigrant! And first and last name, no middle names!)

    Age: (19-40 years old only!)

    Appearance: (Please be descriptive)

    Personality: (List 3 character traits! No more, no less!)

    Fault: (List ONE like clumsy, flirty, forgetful, etc.)

    Career/Job/Student: (Please list your characters job or if they are still in school, or any part time jobs. What you choose will influence what role the character plays in the story and their Bio)

    Relationship: (Single or married or engaged or divorced)

    Status: (Alive, injured, sick, crazy, etc.)

    Connection to main character or victim: (List victim or main character then choose either: None, friend, rival or enemy)

    Weapon: (None or list something relevant to the time period.)

    Other: (One sentence only or don't put anything. You can put anything you want here content wise.)

    NO BIO! If you put one I won't use it!
    Also I might change stuff if it doesn't fit with my storyline. If I have to change something I'll let you know.


    EDIT:
    Characters i've accepted
    1. Lucy Forswurth
    2. Michael Anderson
    3.Abigail Evans
    5.Trish Scarvinoch
    6.Dr. James Scott
    7. Darren Cromwell
    8. Alexander Roberts
    9. Kay Pascäl

    Storallelite
     
  2. Name: Lucy Forswurth
    Age: 23
    Appearance: Long dark hair, green eyes, and a small body. She likes to wear dark green and prefers pumps to flats.

    Personality: Intelligent, articulate, ambitious

    Fault: Unlucky
    Job: Student at the local university. She also works as an intern at a corporate business stationed nearby.

    Relationship: Single
    Status: In a Coma
    Connection: She happens to know the victim because she always sees him/her when walking to work. At the time the victim was murdered/injured/kidnapped she was walking with him/her when the attacker victimized the victim. She was brutally beaten and left for dead, but in truth she was just unconscious.
    Weapon: She always carries a small pepper spray bottle in her purse which she used that fateful (insert time of victimizing here)

    Other: She has two cats named Kitty and Boo and refers to them collectively as the Kitten Caboodle.
     
  3. Michael Anderson
    19
    Dropped out of High-School: Fixes motorcycles for a living.
    Has always hated the "Victim". He was first jealous, then that jealousy turned to pure hatred.
    Weapon: Switchblade
    British (if you want him to be)
    Personality: Punk, likes to "Rough" things, lone-wolf. (fell free to add or change anything)
    Appearance: Rugged leather jacket, blue eyes, brown hair that he wears in a curl upwards (where you curl the bangs upwards...) 5"11 (my fav height :) )
     
  4. Name: Abigail Evans

    Age: 18

    Appearance: Long, curly auburn hair. Dark blue eyes. Pale skin. 5"7 tall. A bit underweight. Not very athletic. She's very pretty, but doesn't know it.

    Gender: Female

    Personality: Intelligent. Caring. Honest.

    Fault: Clumsy

    Career: She's a student, but works part-time at the local library.

    Relationship: She's single, but has a huge crush on her best guy-friend.

    Status: Alive with a sprained ankle

    Connection: She and the victim were very good friends. She was actually going to come with the victim and (insert name here) the night of the deed, but she tripped and sprained her ankle so she couldn't come. Her clumsiness actually saved her for once.

    Weapon: Whatever is nearby

    Other: She writes down her every feeling in her poems, which she hides so no one can use them against her.

    Like it?
     
  5. Oh! I typed the wrong age, I meant 19, not 18 xD
     
  6. Name: Trish Scarvinoch
    Age: 25

    Appearance: Large black glasses, closely cropped blonde hair. Typically wears a trench coat and high heeled black boots. Has a large camera around her neck.

    Personality: Clever, sneaky, shady
    Fault: Bad English (and thick Russian accent)

    Job: Russian Spy

    Weapon: small hand pistol

    Relationship to Victim:

    Trish had been following the Victim for a while, and was watching in the shadows when the Victim was _______ed. She had been taking photos of the Victim, and might have a few shots containing the attacker.
     
  7. Name: Trish Scarvinoch
    Age: 25

    Appearance: Tall and skinny, Large black glasses, closely cropped blonde hair. Typically wears a trench coat and high heeled black boots. Has a large camera around her neck.

    Personality: Clever, sneaky, shady

    Fault: Extremely Bad English (and thick Russian accent)

    Career: Russian Spy, sent to learn about (insert city)'s military value.

    Status: laying low, alive
    Relationship: single

    Weapon: small hand pistol

    Link to Victim:

    Trish had been following the Victim for a while, and was watching in the shadows when the Victim was _______ed. She had been taking photos of the Victim, and might have a few shots containing the attacker.
     
  8. Gah! Sorry about the double post :| the latter is more detailed.
     
  9. ---------
    Dr. James Anderson
    ---------
    Age: 27

    Appearance: Before most people meet James, they assume he's a spindly, stringy thing, the type of male that no one likes. He's quite the contrary, though.
    Everything on him is defined and toned, and his muscles are much larger than a average man's, but smaller than a muscle builder's (one of those people who non-stop build muscle and eat only protein).
    His four-toned hair color is what really draws people's attention. Dark brown, aubergine, voluptuous gold, and sandy blonde, all coming together to create the sensual pleasure that is curly hair.
    Green eyes is his most deceptive feature. They are analytical, yet soft and gentle, and one look at those eyes'll have someone mesmerized.
    Some people believe he's Hispanic or an African British (African American?) who's just light-skinned. This is not true. James is Caucasian and African British, with several other races mixed in. Being a native and all, his natural creamy caramel colored skin has a slight bronze glow to it.
    Expect him to be naked at all times while at home. He believes in nudity to a tee, but not in public. While in public, he'll wear clothes such as South Pole jean shorts, Abercrombie jeans, Hollister hoodies, et cetera. As you can see, he's engrained into the pop clothing phenomena.
    ---------
    Personality: Deceptive, Intelligent, ruthless.

    Fault: Flirtatious

    Career/Job/Student: James teaches at the university, after getting a doctorate in archeology at Yale over in the States. Obviously, he teaches a archeology course.
    ---------
    Relationship: Engaged, but has a serious problem with fornication and infidelity.

    Status: Alive and Prominent.

    Connection: His archeological tools were used to victimize and traumatize the victim. He's the victim's friend, though. Some people say he isn't b/c of his deceptiveness.

    Weapon: Ingenuity

    Other: Only he has access to his tools.
     
  10. er...i'm a bit busy....so i can't tell which ones will work yet. If you haven't signed up but want to, leave a character here and there's a 50% chance i'll use it.
    i'll post more later :)
     
  11. I'm in love with it already. You're best genre is mystery.
     
  12. Feather, my character's name is already "Anderson"...
    Unless they're brothers of some sort....
     
  13. Well, Anderson is a very British name.
     
  14. Ok so I've pretty much read them all.
    What I hate about this is because I can't give any info about the victim or story or everything will fall apart.

    So many of the characters have a few issues. I'll break it down here:

    1.Lucy Forswurth (iPimella)
    Character accepted
    Only Problem: Connection with victim. Sorry but I'm going to have to change it b/c the victim wasn't exactly walking anywhere outside when she/he was victimized. I'll change it something similar but not exact.

    2. Michael Anderson (Phoenix)
    Problem: Nothing is wrong with it, it's just you didn't list a fault. Post his fault on my wall and you're character is in. :)

    3.Abigail Evans (Okami)
    Character accepted
    No problems.

    4. Trish Scarvinoch (Beriadanwen)
    Character accepted
    Only problem: The connection to victim is a little bit off like iPimella's character. I'm going to change it a bit so it fits with what happened to the victim. (Once again, it'll be similar to what you wrote but not exact.)

    5.Dr.James Anderson (Feather)
    Problem: You're going to have to change the last name of the character unless you and Phoenix are OK with you're characters being related. Just wall me the new last name and you're character is in. Also I have to cut part of the connection with victim because some of it it doesn't fit with the current story line. Sorry! (There's no way around it)


    I will accept only three more character sign ups! Only restriction is that two characters must be within the age range of 19-22 and their connection is to the victim.(enemy or friend)
    One character must be in the age range of 24-25 and their connection is to the main character.(as a friend)

    Please note: These three may end up being side characters.
     
  15. Oh and BTW, there will also be some other characters I made up myself thrown into the mix(As suspects). This way it'll be more fun trying to guess the culprit.(Whom I haven't decided yet)
     
  16. New name... hmmmm. Dr. James Scott
     
  17. Anderson villiers as British as I can come up with cause it sounds funny while sounding cool
     
  18. @Feather ok Ty! You're character is in.
     
  19. :D

    Your genre is so mystery!

    What happened to the story Mystery you wrote?
     
  20. I finished it long ago. The thread is probably deleted by now and that was my first (KaW) story so I made the mistake of typing straight into KaW. So I have no records of the story.
    I started a sequel but didn't finish it.