These r stories I reckomend on kaw inside the mirror a footprint in the sand smile at a stranger when the sun sets I would love it if someone would read the importance of the same I wrote it and need tips on how to fix it
This is my story and I can't say if it's good or bad since so many people are ignoring it, but it's called The Forgotten Times. It's feedback has a link to it
I think it's because it's so long that people don't want to read all that, but I did, and it wad spectacular!
Bc ur new story is almost identical to your old one, there's not much new to comment about. It's a good piece of writing but exactly the same as The Conqueress.
Not really. I thought I put in a lot of better descriptions and metaphors. Plus barely anyone read The Conqueress either so it shouldn't matter