General Lumzor

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Yipyapper, Apr 1, 2012.

  1. General Lumzor was a famous general under Apheriun while he was a king. Apheriun had been in a very difficult time, being part of the recent Kingdoms at War campaign that had kingdoms attacking each other relentlessly. Apheriun eventually fell into insanity after being under severe stress and was exiled into the nether realm, but that's another story.

    Lumzor was the military commander of the kingdom, and was the real one with power, his king being a mere figurehead for the most part. He had allied himself with many groups of kingdoms, and his kingdom was part of many clans thereof. These clans frequently would war each other, and one day, he had to choose who he has to stick with, because he can't be allied with 2 warring clans and be friends with them both at the same time.

    Lumzor loved war, but his kingdom was not sufficiently large and powerful enough to take on the more powerful kingdoms. He had a decent amount of forges to create war tools, but he needed more to take on more powerful enemies. He got his answer when he permanently joined a clan.

    On behalf of his kingdom, he joined the clan known as iG, with whom he had made many firends. He eventually learned of a secret power, the power to summon powerful giants, from his friends in iG. He was able to use the kingdom's last funds to create enough summoning circles to surround his castle with. But he couldn't get more funds through taxes or other income sources, because he was not the king. So he created an army or giants, which took about an hour, and overthrew the king Apheriun. Apheriun fought back hard, but he was no match for the giants and went insane, exiled into the nether realm.

    Lumzor was the new king of his kingdom, and he used the funds he had acquired from Apheriun's personal stash and subsequent taxes to improve the summoning circles to it's fullest. He was finally on par with other kingdoms, and he joined in many wars against other clans.

    He loved his warring nature, which eventually got out of hand, and the members of iG kicked him out of the clan over fear that he would go crazy and attack everyone. However, this made things worse, because he wanted to get revenge on iG for kicking him out, and he tinkered with the summoning circles to find a way to improve them further out of his rage. What he discovered astonished him, because he tapped into a new summoning ritual for the circles, creating elemental figures. His adjustments had created new beings... fire elemental beings.

    Lumzor knew that they would be far more powerful than the giants, so he had all of the summoning circles switched into these "Circle of Elements" throughout his kingdom. His power hungry nature led him to exterminate clan after clan, and eventually, he confronted iG. However, iG had grown immensely since his last visit, and they had many allies by their side. Although none of them had the power of elementalism in their kingdoms, the sheer number of clans led Lumzor to halt his attacks. He used his might thereon to attack and kill 3 beasts, Calydor, Z'uthmerak and a troll name Usaris.

    By the time he found Thorak, a powerful golem, he had been tired of these beasts. He killed Thorak and took his legendary fire armour, and attached it to one of his elemental beings. He then noticed an old ruin of a summoning circle from another kingdom a long time ago, but it seemed peculiar. He investigated it, and it was a portal to the nether realm. He deduced that the nether beings inside could be even more powerful than the elementals, so he opened the portal to the nether realm.

    To his disadvantage, he found that Apheriun, now a souless creature, had taken command of every nether being in the nether realm and was now able to walk on the earth, thanks to the new opening. Lumzor attempted to slay them, but after Apheriun placed a large seal on the horde, they destroyed every elemental and Apheriun himself killed Lumzor in revenge.

    iG would not stand by idly, because they were able to access the now devoid circle of elementals of Lumzor's fallen kingdom, and used the technology from them in their own kingdoms. With the number of kingdoms attacking with the power of elementals, Apheriun didn't stand a chance and was sent back to the nether realm.

    What occured from all of this, is that Apheriun comes back frequently from his rest to attack the earth, because the portal to the nether realm was never closed, so clans have to defeat him eternally. He created nether versions of the beasts slain by Lumzor, so they must be defeated eternally as well. This was all manageable, until Hawthorn came onto the scene, but that's another story. The Circle of Elements also became a new thing for kingdoms to build to increase their power.

    Lumzor never became a nether being, and his power hungry tyranny was gone from the world forever.

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  2. you really need to find something other than kaw related fiction to write about. haven't you anything better to do?

    I guess it doesn't really matter in the long run, this story sucks bad. so I'd imagine anything you tried writing would stink just as bad.
     
  3. Ouch. I am hurt you would say something so hurtful.

    Get real, you are a terrible troll. Maybe I can give you some tips? The first tip is to make people angry, not laugh.