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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Goldenheartz (01), Aug 26, 2011.

  1. So..... How's my first story on KaW? I did start this story along with a couple others on PIMD.... But I was forced to delete PIMD, so now I write on KaW. So...... Yeah!
     
    #1 *Goldenheartz (01), Aug 26, 2011
  2. It's not half bad. Could use a tiny bit more description, but otherwise, a very attractive story.
     
    #2 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  3. Yeah..... I do tend to rush into things with little description, I'll try to focus on that!
     
    #3 *Goldenheartz (01), Aug 26, 2011
  4. Great stuff so far keep up the great work
     
    #4 *babygurl2112 (01), Aug 26, 2011
  5. I love it. But like cheese said, describe more.
     
    #5 Bremen, Aug 27, 2011
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