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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010.

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  1. Click here to read crap. This story is dead now. I'm done with it ^_^no point in beating a dead horse
     
    #1 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  2. Okay I threw all that I have so far. Sorry it's so long I just wanted to get it over with and post it all
     
    #2 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  3. Haven't gotten the chance to read it all yet, but what I've read is ver good!
     
    #3 *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010
  4. Thanks. I honestly don't care if anyone reads it. I just thought I'd take a chance to get feedback since no one's read it besides some jerk at school
     
    #4 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  5. I finisher the first five chapters, it's really good! You have an amazing talent!
     
    #5 *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010
  6. Thanks. I want to be a writer in movies (or actress and director) because but everyone I know is too immature. Plus I have nowhere to start
     
    #6 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  7. I understand. I am going to be a famous author when I grow older. (not want to be, I WILL BE!) I am very determined.
     
    #7 *lady-marian (01), Sep 25, 2010
  8. A lot of it is the same, just under different names. But still, it is good.
     
    #8 osterly, Sep 25, 2010
  9. Yeah I'm still trying to tweak things out so it's not obvious it used to be a lotr fanfiction
     
    #9 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  10. I wanna go into the music business and start a record company.....by the way very good job
     
    #10 german_idiot, Sep 25, 2010
  11. Thanks. I'm planning on making this a movie when I get it published (I'm overambitious) but the movie will have a little surprise
     
    #11 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  12. ....is it gonna hav Criss Angel in it
     
    #12 german_idiot, Sep 25, 2010
  13. Can he sing?
     
    #13 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  14. Don't think so......but he can do crazy magic stuff
     
    #14 german_idiot, Sep 25, 2010
  15. I'll think about it. He might be good at playing Hades... Though special effects could rule things out
     
    #15 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  16. Hades actually has a huge part in this book... And a part of him you don't expect
     
    #16 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  17. He breeds shih tuzs?
     
    #17 german_idiot, Sep 25, 2010
  18. Lol no. My stories normally don't have any comedy
     
    #18 Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010
  19. Bump 
     
    #19 Conqueress, Sep 26, 2010
  20. Oh for Pete's sake bump!
     
    #20 Conqueress, Sep 28, 2010
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