forever comes too soon

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheNeo, Mar 24, 2014.

  1. I can never be the perfection you seem to think I am.
    I can only ever promise to try and be your man.
    And in the end I know that it won't be enough.
    And on that day you walk away things will be so rough.
    So I try and and brace for impact to spare myself that pain.
    But there's no way to stop it, like an on-coming train.
    I grit my teeth and try told hold my head up high.
    I promised not to do this. I promised not to cry.
    But the tears trickle down my face, my firm resolve now gone.
    Left alone in sadness to wonder what went wrong.
    I know harsh words were spoken, thrown out both ways.
    And I know this last week was full of our darkest days.
    But even knowing all that I still wonder why.
    For all the things you told me why wouldn't you just try?
    But I guess it doesn't matter, you're gone from my side.
    And all I have to comfort me is the honest fact I tried.
    All the lovely words about what you meant to me were true.
    I meant it when I said that I'll always have love for you.

    Goodbye- Ahdragos
     
  2. Nice poem. That was... I don't know… grim and emotional, but still great.
     
  3. Thanks. When I write, it's always real. I can't write unless something is going on at the time. It's a means of trying to get the feelings out I guess.
     
  4. take that and publish it thats gold