floating isles feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by mrTacos2503, Nov 21, 2011.

  1. Feed back for my book floating isles
     
    #1 mrTacos2503, Nov 21, 2011
  2. A bit too brief and a few errors.
    You should try proof reading :)
    I think you could give some more details.
     
    #2 Storallelite, Nov 24, 2011
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