First try at FF! -Poem: Lucky.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by babyguy, Apr 9, 2012.

  1. Lucky:

    Sitting there so close to me,
    It's so real.
    They talk to me like it's no big deal.
    I respond casually.
    We part, and i start to think.

    Lucky, is the word in my head.
    Lucky, to have them as my friend,
    How would life be without her,
    So lonely and so dreary,
    As if no one even cared?
    They love me, like true love.
    I'm lucky to have you, i swear!

    I'd be lost without your guidance!
    Like a small fish in to middle of the ocean,
    Trying to find someone that cared.

    Love is what you give me,
    But how can i give back?
    I can't live up to that kindness!
    Not even close.

    But again, I'm lucky!
    And I want it to stay that way.


    Give me your thoughts and feedback here!

    -babyguy.

    !
     
  2. lol

    all the poems on kaw sound like an emo wrote it
     
  3. Does this really sound like an emo? It's not like I'm saying "If i didnt habe you i'd kill myself."
     
  4. *Steals for songwriting*
     
  5. it does sound pretty emo in my opinion
     
  6. d_bo to you everything is emo :p
     
  7. But yeah I liked it.