First "love" poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Antispragga, Apr 3, 2011.

  1. Posted this in another topic,
    Sooo reposting it here,
    Tell me what you think 
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    Can't you see that I'm desparate?
    Can't you see that I'm in love?
    Oh why...
    Can't you see?
    Can't you love me?
    Can't you choose me?
    I love you...
    Do you not love me...?

    My love for you is endless,
    As endless as the sea,
    It's as mysterious as the sky,
    With the millions of stars going high,
    It maybe as twisted as my mind,
    Which someday I will find,
    I want to express it in words,
    But it's so hard to say,
    I can't find a way,
    You're amazing,
    I find you perfect in (almost) every way,
    There are small details which I dislike,
    But everyone has these,
    But no matter what, I still love you,
    You, and only you,
    I won't cheat, I won't lie,
    The three words I say,
    Have been the most true,
    Out of the blue,
    I love you.
    I sing a song,
    In my mind,
    But I speak these words,
    "I love you, will you be mine?"
     
  2. Thts really good:)
     
  3. Great job Tia! It's awesome! It's original right? It's so emotional:) love it!
     
  4. AWESOME TIA....whose it 4 tel me!!!!!! this is a great poem
     
  5. That was truly amazing.

    It has to be for someone special. Who's it for? 
     
  6. That is so cute :) I wish someone would say that to me.
     
  7. Ahh thats so cute 
    I wish someone would say that to me 
     
  8. Oh I said pretty much what queen did
     
  9. It's such a nice poem!