January 21st 6:00 AM Barraner Avert. His very name struck fear into the hearts of Millions left on earth. He had no respect for human life, and was not afraid to extinguish any hope someone had in order to get what he wanted. His target today was John Cortez. He had denied Barraner his wife, now his whole family would pay. He had a new method he wanted to try. He had developed a new substance called Intelligent Cold Entity. I.C.E. for short. He would freeze the whole family. Two Hours later, their screams echoed throughout the night. Barraner laughed as his guards froze them all, even their dog. As he drove off he thought of more ways to torture people. He left two guards behind. Ten minutes later The guards heard a crack. Then an explosion of ice. It was impossible but the Thirteen year old son of John Cortez, Jarrod, broke the I.C.E. and survived. They cocked their weapons then braced them selves as they fired. Jarrod prepared for death as bullets sped toward his heart, but as they touched him, they froze and shattered. The guards stared in horror, then turned to run. About halfway out the door, they were literally froze in there tracks. Jarrod kicked them and they shattered as they hit the ground. Jarrod stared at his hands, which had now turned icy blue. "Oh My God." he said. He turned toward his family. He ran over to his dad, who was permanently froze with his arms over his daughter, Liza, Jarrods' baby sister. Jarrod swore vengeance on Barraner that day. He swore to avenge his family. Barraner would die.
I probably wouldn't have posted here if you'd have asked nicely. I didn't see a "please" in your OP. It sounded more like a command than a request.
Chapter2: Logan Darwin Jack Darwin was as powerful as you can be without being Barraner Avert. He was Barraners personal advisor. But if you tell a tyrant what he doesn't want to hear, he will kill you. Jack did just that. He told Barraner what he didn't want to hear. On March 18th Barraner organized an attack on Jacks Home. His son, Logan was only Nine years old at the time. What he saw that day, scarred him for life. He was in his room, playing with a portal. Logan had always been special. He could create objects out of thin air. The bigger they were, the longer it took to make them. When Jack saw the Forces coming, he told Jack to take his Two year old sister and run. Logan and his sister Natalie, ran up the stairs as a spray of gunfire shattered the windows, and he heard his mom scream. He saw her collapse and knew she wouldn't open her eyes. Tears streamed down his face as he ran to his room. He created a bar, and put it in front of his door. He grabbed his sister and put her through the portal. He knew it led to a little cottage about 30 miles away. He climbed in as he heard the door being banged on, and cringed as it splintered. He jumped in and closed the portal. The Soldiers busted in, and looked around. There was nothing inside. The head of the operation, Sargent Blaze, put in a call to Barraner. " What is it Blaze?" Barraner answered. "We killed the family." Blaze answered. " Why do I hear nervousness on your voice?" Barraner asked. " I... Uhhh. I don't know sir." Blaze stuttered. " I see." Barraner said firmly. " Put Captain Raymond on the phone please." "Yessir." Blaze said. "Captain Raymond, You have been promoted to Sargent." Barraner said. " Now shoot Mr. Blaze please." "Yessir." Raymond said. He turned his weapon on Blaze and fired three times, in the head. Logan Raised his sister for three years, until he couldn't supply the food and water any more. When she was five, he took her to an orphanage, and left her in their care. At least she'll have a life. he thought to himself. On the day of his parents death he swore to one day kill Barraner Avert. The time is near.
Chapter 3: Don't test a Ninja Jarrod woke up early. He put his hand over the campfire which put it out. He grabbed a plain white T- Shirt, and his jacket, then grabbed his pack and set out. He had been walking for days. Occasionally he would kill a bird or Fox, or the occasional cayote, for food. He was headed to Radium. The crowned Jewel of Barraner Averts collection of cities. There he would find him, then kill him. He had no plan, but he decided he would go to the nearest town and get supplies. He had nothing with him but his Katanas, his guns, the clothes on his back, and a sleeping bag. He continued on the road until he reached a small village called maridum. If this town existed in the current time, it would be the most advanced place ever, but there, it seemed low tech compared to Radium. Jarrod walked into the Main Store. "I need supplies." he said. His voice was rough from not using it in so long. "You aren't from around here are you?" said the Robot behind the counter. "No." Jarrod replied. "I'm not." " Okay. What do you need?" Said the Robot. "I need Ammo, a new knife and a motorcycle." "A motorcycle?!" The robot nearly blew a fuse. "I can get you the other stuff, but the motorcycles are sold down the street." The robot gave Jarrod all of the stuff. " That will be 14 cubiks." the robot said. Jarrod handed over the money. " Before you go, what is your name?" it asked. " Jarrod. Jarrod Cortez." The robots artificial eyes got wide. "The son of John Cortez?" "Yeah." "There is somebody you might want to meet." the robot said. " She kinda keeps to herself. Her name is Yuki. You'll know her when you see her. One brown eye, one green eye. Love tattoo over her eye." "Thanks." Jarrod said. Jarrod walked down the street to the Bike store. He bought a hover bike and drove to the end of the town. There, sitting on a bench sharpening a Katana, was a girl with one brown eye, and one green eye. Yuki. "He got off, are you Yuki?" he asked. She narrowed her eyes suspiciously. "Who's asking?" she said. "Me. Jarrod Cortez." "So you are the famed Jarrod Frost Cortez." "That's me." He said. "Hear you are after Barraner Avert." "Yeah." "Mind if I tag along?" "No, but I'm pressed for time. Get on the bike if you are coming." "Get on the bike if you are coming." she mimicked him. " Fine. I'll come frosty." "Don't call me frosty." "Whatever, let's go." Jarrod revved the engine and sped off down the road, with Yuki on back. One step closer to Barraner Avert.
Chapter 4: Drive slow when Icy Jarrod had drove over a hundred miles with Yuki on the back when he came to a barricade. This meant he was just 50 miles from Radium. The problem was, they wouldn't let him through if they knew who he and Yuki were. Sweat rolled his forehead, then froze. It was his turn to pull up. "Who are you?" the guard asked. "Somebody you don't want to know. The guard was reaching for his gun when Jarrod froze him. Suddenly the air was filled with gun shots. Yuki jumped off of the bike, and Sliced as a bullet sped toward her, it ricochet off of the sword, and hit the man who shot it. Jarrod didn't know it, but as he was turned around, a guard fired a silenced bullet, right at his head. A guy jumped in the way, instantly created a shield, and deflected it. Then he shot the guy in the head. Jarrod turned around. He saw the guy standing there. He instinctively got ready to freeze him. "Wait!!!" the guy yelled. "I just saved you." "He did." Yuki said. "Who are you?" Jarrod asked. "My name is Logan Darwin." he said. "And you are here because?" "We all want the same thing." he said. "We all want to see Barraner Suffer." "What did he do to you?" Yuki asked. "He tried to kill my whole family. My sister and I escaped." "We are going to Radium. Do you you have a ride?" Jarrod asked. "Yeah." "Fine. You can come along." Jarrod said.
" He was in his room, playing with a portal " HAHA lmao too stupid and too funny, the same for the Robots in those times :lol: , other then that, I guess I..
Neighhh! Grammar Unicorn is not liking all of the spelling errors! (Even I won't, and can't, correct those) Reffering to my parentheses, humans these days... Don't even respect unicorns... tch tch tch.