"Fields of Heaven" Feedback written by SW

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 29, 2010.

  1. This is my feedback thread for "Fields of Heaven" feel free to post your thoughts Idk about criticism as long as it's constructive thank you :)
     
    #1 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 29, 2010
  2. Thread moved from other game discussion to fan fiction.
     
    #2 Benny, Dec 31, 2010
  3. .
     
    #3 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 31, 2010
  4. Yea it got moved! Btw great story please write more
     
    #4 Storallelite, Dec 31, 2010
  5. Thanks stora will do :)
     
    #5 *NecroHyphen (01), Dec 31, 2010
  6. .
     
    #6 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 5, 2011
  7. Great post!
     
    #7 Storallelite, Jan 6, 2011
  8. - Update - new chapter out now
     
    #8 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 9, 2011
  9. Another great part but I'm a bit confused to why Logan wanted to kill his brother if he's the older one?
     
    #9 Storallelite, Jan 9, 2011
  10. Logan is evil and trying to take the kingdom and Jason is the only one who knows the truth... So on and so forth
     
    #10 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 10, 2011
  11. Ah ok
     
    #11 Storallelite, Jan 10, 2011
  12. Bump
     
    #12 *NecroHyphen (01), Jan 19, 2011
  13. BUMPARUNY
     
    #13 *NecroHyphen (01), Feb 9, 2011
  14. Mysterious..... :shock:
     
    #14 Storallelite, Feb 10, 2011
  15. Nice face ^^
     
    #15 *NecroHyphen (01), Feb 10, 2011
  16. :| :twisted:
     
    #16 Storallelite, Feb 10, 2011
  17. You got my hopes up, thought someone else had posted on feedback :(
     
    #17 *NecroHyphen (01), Feb 10, 2011
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