Please comment your feedback on this thread not the other one. Name name of the story/poem you are critiquing Feedback/Comment/Concern please state which one of the 3 it is What you have to say your comments can go here. This is from this thread Thanks, Fiddler
This might be ff, but it's a bit of an inconvenience to read the other thread, then come back and post on this one isn't it? Also clogs up ff..
There's feedback for every writer as they don't want it on the original thread, unless you want to move posts between mine. But go ahead lock it, lock mine you better be locking the other "pointless feedback threads".
@Drgnblade its just a courtesy thing. On the actual threadfuck It helps keep everything in order and looking professional,
I'm Gunna make different sections for your different poems Stones Sounds like something a warrior would chant to itself before facing off to its enemy. Good, but kinda short and looks like its cut off early. Try expanding on it a little more; make it longer. Cry of a Raven I like this thread, but the last line doesnt fit in, and it killed it for me. Sorry :? Labyrinthian It has a warning but isn't that scary. WIll it be expanded? No Named Poem This poem is like one I made in 8th grade for a project at school. I questioned why poems are made the way they were, etc. I like this one better though :lol: Will add more feedback later; gotta go call the girlfriend :roll:
I will edit in feedback to this post when I get on the computer 'cause I'm too lazy to do it right now. Btw, I love you drgn.