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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by yRuSoSaMmIcH, Jul 9, 2010.

  1. This will be a story about a group of people who unknowingly break a gang code, and must fight for their lives, while making friends and getting help from police and their new friends. Not sure about the title yet, but the setting is modern day. Bios should look like this:

    Name:
    Age:
    Sex:
    Appearance:
    Weapons:
    Faction (Gangsters or Violators):
    Background:


    Please do not leave anything out. This story will be written by me, igloo_Mimi, and alextheredblob. This is produced by iWrite Co.
     
  2. Name: Rika
    Age: 17
    Sex: Female
    Appearance: 5'3", short choppy black hair, pale skin, slim, and athletic, has purple eyes enhanced with contacts. Wears short shorts and tank tops most of the time.
    Weapon: Stun gun and small hand gun.
    Faction: Gangsters
    Background: Very smart, but dropped out of school and got into drugs. She joined a gang soon after, and has been in it since. She's cold and calculating, and will do anything to gain power and/or seek revenge. Her father left when she was young and her mother was an alcoholic.
     
  3. Name: Lucas
    Age: 15
    Sex: Male
    Appearance: Short and skinny
    Weapons: Throwing stars and a Bo staff
    Good guy
    Background: Is a rogue. Is very quiet. Does bot make friends easily

    ~iDan~
     
  4. Sammich I'm lost what do I gotta do? Am I just doin the opening paragraph(s)?
     
  5. uhh same except, when do i know when to write. *whiny child moment*
     
  6. Name=Matt redcliff
    appearance=6"6,shaved head,kinda bulky
    weapon=Uzi
    faction=violator
    age18
    background=ran away at 16 and joined a street gang
     
  7. This should have been planned more extensively before making it public...
     
  8. Name: Marco "Staccato" Toscano
    Age: 23
    Sex: Male
    Appearance: Staccato is tall, gangly, and has terrible posture. He wears clothing most wouldn't call "gangsterly"; long-sleeved, dark, and tight-fitting. He has long red-blonde hair that does whatever it wants, so to speak. He wears gloves at all times.
    Weapons: Knives, two pistols, and a semi-automatic rifle.
    Faction: Gangster
    Background (also kinda personality): Staccato isn't the type of person one would expect to be in a gang. He's soft-spoken and respectful, but also bat-**** crazy. He isn't athletic, but he has excellent reflexes and is flexible, which leads to some scary knife skills. He entered the criminal world when he turned 18 and finished high school. He's a romantic at heart, and decided that a gang would be the best way to put his dreams into practice. So, he became one the easiest, quickest way he could: he murdered one of the more prominent gangsters. Over the next five years he cemented his place as both a dependable man and a crazy-ass oddball.

    (If you guys wanna change anything (if you plan on using him), that's cool. But if you don't use him, I'm gonna in something cause I alreadly love this dude. ^_^)
     
  9. Nick Name:private
    Age:17
    Sex:male
    Appearence:6ft muscular tanish thin
    Weapons: AK47 with an underbarrel chainsaw and an intervention thermal
    Side: Violaters
    skillz:sneaky fast agile
     
  10. Name: matt
    age: 16
    appereance: 5'7 dirty blonde straight hair strong muscular
    side: good guy
    weapon: 2 silenced 9mm hand guns
    backround: parents killed by gang members devoted rest of life to kill all gangsters fast and silently
     
  11. Sounds good
     
  12. Hey peoples I'm doing the character background stuff so send that to me in pal please.
     
  13. Don't got pal

    ~iDan~
     
  14. Soo... Send it to you even if we posted here? *Confused!*
     
  15. Yes Mara. And ok Dan I'll write your stuff down.
     
  16. I got a character
    Name: Luke "ClawFace" Hunter
    Apperance: tall and burly with claw scar on his face
    Weapons: shotgun knife and a semi auto pistol
    Age:17
    Bio: his bro(david) got on drugs and went crazy and cut the scar on lukes face when luke was only 7. david also killed their parents before killing himself. Luke was left all alone on the streets to fend for himself. He learned that money was the way to be happy so he will fight for the side that pays the best
     
  17. Name: Derek
    sex:no thanx
    appearance short and muscular with black hair and a tatoo on arm
     
  18. Weopon: desert eagles
    side: gangsta
    backround was almost killed by the violaters and wants revenge
     
  19. Crap forgot age
    age: 14
    smart in tactics to kill very sneaky and quick