Feedback: The Secret Keeper

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010.

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  1. Post Feedback at your on risk. There's no gaurentee that the Government won't see and put your face on a wanted poster in 10 seconds flat.

    Naw, jk. This should be safe from the government. I hope...
     
    #1 *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010
  2. Great start, keep it up.
    Seth
     
    #2 seth73, Dec 5, 2010
  3. I'm so SICK of stupid online stories flooding the forums... Go to a writers blog or something...
     
    #3 RozoBastion, Dec 5, 2010
  4. Great title
     
    #4 kaw_admin, Dec 5, 2010
  5. Great story I actually learned that Secrets can be dangerous though I still keep them
     
    #5 kaw_admin, Dec 5, 2010
  6. Thanks Seth and Blossonstar.

    @Rozo, no one is telling you to read them. I have been writing on kaw for nearly a year and that's not going to change. Kaw even made a forum dedicated to fan fiction. It's in the write forum, so I don't see why you should have a problem with it. Excuse me for my creativity.
     
    #6 *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010
  7. Great start. And Rozo, relax, they're just words written for other people. If you don't like em, pass then by as you scroll.

    iZ
     
    #7 Nlaz, Dec 5, 2010
  8. We need kaw on android market im tired of playing on a browser with a 2.2inch screen....
     
    #8 *outdoors_is_cool (01), Dec 5, 2010
  9. Thanks, Zaln.

    @kings, you could always play on a pc.
     
    #9 *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010
  10. Nice beginning Irin!;)
     
    #10 *lady-marian (01), Dec 5, 2010
  11. Thanks Marian. =)
     
    #11 *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010
  12. Lol but i wanna be driving and putting ppls lives at risk while playing kaw...
     
    #12 *outdoors_is_cool (01), Dec 5, 2010
  13. Btw im going out today so tell granny to wear running shoes
     
    #13 *outdoors_is_cool (01), Dec 5, 2010
  14. Great story Irin!
     
    #14 Storallelite, Dec 5, 2010
  15. Great story. But what about innocence? I wanna know what happens!!!
     
    #15 Keir117, Dec 5, 2010
  16. Thanks guys!

    But I'm not sure about Innocence. I've been thinking about ditching it...
     
    #16 *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010
  17. Nice addition!;)
     
    #17 *lady-marian (01), Dec 6, 2010
  18. Thanks Marian!
     
    #18 *Irin (01), Dec 6, 2010
  19. -poke-
     
    #19 *Irin (01), Dec 7, 2010
  20. AWESOME!!!;) I can't wait for more!;)
     
    #20 *lady-marian (01), Dec 7, 2010
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