Feedback: Patches

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Irin_of_Erram, Dec 29, 2012.

  1. Fair warning. I've barely looked at this since November, meaning that A) it's not done, and B ) it's not edited. Expect some rough sailing ahead.
    Other than that, I hope you enjoy the ride.
     
  2. I'd have to agree with you on the rough bit.

    However, it's still amazing. Really. I enjoyed it in all of its mildly short glory. Your writing still captures the essence of your character, and translates a person into words better than a lot of legitimately published works I've read.
     
  3. Wow, thanks! That's quite a bit of analyzing from such a short passage. Thanks for reading!
     
  4. I could not put this down. Amazing, the only critique I'd give is there's a few 'to's that should be 'too's or something along those lines, but like you said, it's not edited so, yeah. Can not wait for more, if there is any more.
     
  5. Thanks, Smighter! I'll try and watch out for that, and I will def try to write more of this.
     
  6. Bump so no one posts on the story
     
  7. ....
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    Oh my gosh! Irin! No way. This is real! You disappeared. That made me sad.
     
  8. Marion? Is that you??
    How are you???? It's been forever!