Fair warning. I've barely looked at this since November, meaning that A) it's not done, and B ) it's not edited. Expect some rough sailing ahead. Other than that, I hope you enjoy the ride.
I'd have to agree with you on the rough bit. However, it's still amazing. Really. I enjoyed it in all of its mildly short glory. Your writing still captures the essence of your character, and translates a person into words better than a lot of legitimately published works I've read.
I could not put this down. Amazing, the only critique I'd give is there's a few 'to's that should be 'too's or something along those lines, but like you said, it's not edited so, yeah. Can not wait for more, if there is any more.